Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Miracles - The End"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
20 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Beautifully finished off and well wrapped up with the carolers, When a child is born. Families, when they are loving, is a part of the miracle of life. Well done Carol. Loved this book.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Beautifully finished off and well wrapped up with the carolers, When a child is born. Families, when they are loving, is a part of the miracle of life. Well done Carol. Loved this book.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sticking with the story, Valda. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. I'm fighting my way through the backlog of reviews since I got home. Making headway, I think.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent final chapter, and I can visualise this playing out in a movie. It was a clever touch to bring it all to a positive conclusion for each of them in time for the celebrations of Christmas in their world and ours. Very well done.Congratulations again on finishing in time.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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An excellent final chapter, and I can visualise this playing out in a movie. It was a clever touch to bring it all to a positive conclusion for each of them in time for the celebrations of Christmas in their world and ours. Very well done.Congratulations again on finishing in time.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Wow! I can't believe I got so far behind on these reviews but i do want you to know how much I appreciate your support and thoughts on all my stories. Thank you so very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Bravo, Carol, you did it! Actually you went way beyond the 10,000 words and turned out a great story, wonderfully polished.
Exceptional work. This will be a fine entry for the contest. So happy for you!
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Bravo, Carol, you did it! Actually you went way beyond the 10,000 words and turned out a great story, wonderfully polished.
Exceptional work. This will be a fine entry for the contest. So happy for you!
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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The other times, the rules had said 30,000 so when I started I thought that was what the goal was...later I saw the 10,000. I might have submitted a different story had I know, but all worked out for the good. Thanks so much for the support and your time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a brilliant ending to your book, Carol. I am glad that there is a happy ever after which is perfect for this time of year. I've really enjoyed reading this book, and I can't wait to see what you write next.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a brilliant ending to your book, Carol. I am glad that there is a happy ever after which is perfect for this time of year. I've really enjoyed reading this book, and I can't wait to see what you write next.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Jacob. I have two things already brewing and of course another Eleanor story...she's family now. LOL Thanks for continuing to follow and enjoy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This was simply amazing, Carol! What a lovely, loving way to end this story. I was in floods of tears as I watched Matthew in his wheelchair with Jenna looking at their baby Margaret. And of course she will thrive under their love. Everyone got what they deserved, Garth now can love Rebecca knowing that is what Ellie wants, and aproves of. Even Frank got a bit chocked up watching everyone on the screen in his office. You wrapped this book up perfectly, and just in time for Christmas! I think this is your best book, even with the others being superb. I can't wait to read Eleanor's next adventure, and I do hope they can change Miranda's mind and have her stay on, I love ghosts, especially these ghosts! Lol. Loved it, my friend, you are one very awesome author! Love you lots, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This was simply amazing, Carol! What a lovely, loving way to end this story. I was in floods of tears as I watched Matthew in his wheelchair with Jenna looking at their baby Margaret. And of course she will thrive under their love. Everyone got what they deserved, Garth now can love Rebecca knowing that is what Ellie wants, and aproves of. Even Frank got a bit chocked up watching everyone on the screen in his office. You wrapped this book up perfectly, and just in time for Christmas! I think this is your best book, even with the others being superb. I can't wait to read Eleanor's next adventure, and I do hope they can change Miranda's mind and have her stay on, I love ghosts, especially these ghosts! Lol. Loved it, my friend, you are one very awesome author! Love you lots, Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
My dear Carol, you've done a magnificent job of giving us a wonderfully planned out and executed story. And it has a happy ending at Christmastime - how timely:-) Ready for the Hallmark channel.
Congratulations on doing this in 30 days. You are awesome! Good luck in the contest. I admire what you've done. Now go have some fun and take a break!
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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My dear Carol, you've done a magnificent job of giving us a wonderfully planned out and executed story. And it has a happy ending at Christmastime - how timely:-) Ready for the Hallmark channel.
Congratulations on doing this in 30 days. You are awesome! Good luck in the contest. I admire what you've done. Now go have some fun and take a break!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I knew you would wrap it up all well and bring a happy ending for everyone. Great job getting through all this while traveling and doing all the Thanksgiving cooking and enjoying your granddaughter's family!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I knew you would wrap it up all well and bring a happy ending for everyone. Great job getting through all this while traveling and doing all the Thanksgiving cooking and enjoying your granddaughter's family!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Life was good .... It was hectic writing the book and being in North Carolina, but I was so happy there with them. I'm glad the book ended well and that it was enjoyed. Thank you for all your support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Tick-tock....
I thought midnight would never get here and you deserve nothing less than six stars my dear friend!
The best final chapter ever!
Seriously.
Step back for one darn minute and bask in the accomplishment of 63,000 words, another entire novel....started and finished in thirty days!
Take a bow!
Eleanor is now like a member of my family...
Don't even think about retiring her!
Mystery.
Crime.
Spirits.
Romance.
A new baby.
AND CHRISTMAS!
SCORE!
You hit this out of the park...
Pop the virtual champagne!
Huge Hugs!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Tick-tock....
I thought midnight would never get here and you deserve nothing less than six stars my dear friend!
The best final chapter ever!
Seriously.
Step back for one darn minute and bask in the accomplishment of 63,000 words, another entire novel....started and finished in thirty days!
Take a bow!
Eleanor is now like a member of my family...
Don't even think about retiring her!
Mystery.
Crime.
Spirits.
Romance.
A new baby.
AND CHRISTMAS!
SCORE!
You hit this out of the park...
Pop the virtual champagne!
Huge Hugs!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Never fear! I love Eleanor too and until I'm told the readers are bored with her...I'll write. Already been playing with ideas for the next one. Don't know if I write it early or kick off the new year with it. We will see how things go.
Love ya, Carol
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However the muse coaxes you, I'll ready for more of your great writing...
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You did a wonderful job with this one, which brought all the threads from the previous books together. I have really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading your next series.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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You did a wonderful job with this one, which brought all the threads from the previous books together. I have really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading your next series.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always. I am blessed by the stars and your enjoyment of what I wrote. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What an aptly seasonal and emotional read, Carol! (Even your name is fitting here:)). Your characters all come together here to celebrate Baby Margaret's birth against a background of Johnny Mathis. Thank you for sharing the spirit of Christmas and good luck with your impressive book! Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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What an aptly seasonal and emotional read, Carol! (Even your name is fitting here:)). Your characters all come together here to celebrate Baby Margaret's birth against a background of Johnny Mathis. Thank you for sharing the spirit of Christmas and good luck with your impressive book! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much, Debbie. Just got back home after traveling and I am trying to get caught back up. I truly appreciate your reading and commenting on my book. It was a joy to write and better yet when others love it too.
Smiles, Carol