BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Crimson Leaves Hang On"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
6 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
I wish all the trees here looked like that this time of the year. It's stunning and magical. This is a brilliant piece, Gypsy. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I wish all the trees here looked like that this time of the year. It's stunning and magical. This is a brilliant piece, Gypsy. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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Always a pleasure, my friend.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....your poem makes me miss the warmer weather, although spring, not true summer, too hot for too long what with climate change.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....your poem makes me miss the warmer weather, although spring, not true summer, too hot for too long what with climate change.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
...waving goodbye to month passed
reflecting as the wind changes...
i like the image of the leaves waves waving goodbye to the past
what happened to bob from your first chapter? lol
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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...waving goodbye to month passed
reflecting as the wind changes...
i like the image of the leaves waves waving goodbye to the past
what happened to bob from your first chapter? lol
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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the book of renga is driving me nuts already lol I spent all day trying to edit and edit and figure out how it should go. I should not had used renga for the Japanese poetry club. Oh well, it's done.
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Looks very interesting. It is quite a beautiful and challenging concept that I am apt to try later. Thanks for sharing this with me. As always I find your color scheme vividly clear and stunning.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Looks very interesting. It is quite a beautiful and challenging concept that I am apt to try later. Thanks for sharing this with me. As always I find your color scheme vividly clear and stunning.
RJ
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I thought you said the first one is five seven five. And then the next one is seven seven. This has two five seven fives in a row. you need to switch it around don't you?
Anyhoo, this is a fun idea. Karen
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I thought you said the first one is five seven five. And then the next one is seven seven. This has two five seven fives in a row. you need to switch it around don't you?
Anyhoo, this is a fun idea. Karen
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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June wrote the 5/7/5 first chapter; I wrote the second chapter 7/7
It's going to take a while to get the hang of it. It's a complicated form but we will be okay.
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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Now I am waiting for the nesxt 5-7-5 so I can add back in my 7-7 couplet. I wrote to Shelley about renumbering her chapter.
I am learning thank you. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
It would be nice to have a hot summer day! But it's really cold now. It's nice to remember the warmth and to think of a leaf still clinging on to the memories of summer!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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It would be nice to have a hot summer day! But it's really cold now. It's nice to remember the warmth and to think of a leaf still clinging on to the memories of summer!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️