BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Pond Reflects"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I absolutely love the weaving of the natural world and the feelings (life?) of the reader (or writer!) in a simple photograph!! So very well done, my lady! :) Thanx for sharing! :-)Yvette
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Oh, I absolutely love the weaving of the natural world and the feelings (life?) of the reader (or writer!) in a simple photograph!! So very well done, my lady! :) Thanx for sharing! :-)Yvette
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely golden photo -and I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem, June as the you bring in the reflection of memories as Autumn leaves give way to winter chills.Nicely done,
cheers
valda
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A lovely golden photo -and I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem, June as the you bring in the reflection of memories as Autumn leaves give way to winter chills.Nicely done,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, June. What a perfect interpretation of the image. I've seen golden water like that so often and never given it much thought. I will look at it differently now. I'll think of summer and the warm days. What a pleasant way of looking at it.
You changed my perspective here. Well done.
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I like this, June. What a perfect interpretation of the image. I've seen golden water like that so often and never given it much thought. I will look at it differently now. I'll think of summer and the warm days. What a pleasant way of looking at it.
You changed my perspective here. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
Your words and artwork connect perfectly, as the chill arrives, we are reminded of warmer days, and it seems so peaceful and calm no matter what we feel, very well presented****kahpot
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Your words and artwork connect perfectly, as the chill arrives, we are reminded of warmer days, and it seems so peaceful and calm no matter what we feel, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, June,
Wonderful two-line 7/7 syllables renga poem. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you for the explanation in your author notes, they are very helpful and succinct. Well done, I knew you wouldn't disappoint.
Gypsy
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Hello, June,
Wonderful two-line 7/7 syllables renga poem. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you for the explanation in your author notes, they are very helpful and succinct. Well done, I knew you wouldn't disappoint.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
I am all for your 7-7 couplet!
Phrasing and illustration are in sync. Color scheme is nice!
IMHO I would increase the font size of your text to increase its presentation value for other reviewers.
Mark
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I am all for your 7-7 couplet!
Phrasing and illustration are in sync. Color scheme is nice!
IMHO I would increase the font size of your text to increase its presentation value for other reviewers.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Rick Gardner
Quiet days, thinking of nothing, doing nothing, nothing to do but sit here and contemplate nothing at all. Can go back home, but will stay here a while longer.
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Quiet days, thinking of nothing, doing nothing, nothing to do but sit here and contemplate nothing at all. Can go back home, but will stay here a while longer.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The picture and poem blend seamlessly. It is perfection. I am amazed at how effortless it seems. These little ones are buggers. I love Haiki but it is not easy saying so much with so little. Karen
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The picture and poem blend seamlessly. It is perfection. I am amazed at how effortless it seems. These little ones are buggers. I love Haiki but it is not easy saying so much with so little. Karen
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024