A Dog's Life, What Dogs Do
The story of Zoie, the dog's dog.9 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
Clever and humorous put together. A dog's life. So much to it but simple really. Food early and late, walks and scratches to the head. This is a good entry in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a good life.
Cheers,
Barry Penfold.
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Clever and humorous put together. A dog's life. So much to it but simple really. Food early and late, walks and scratches to the head. This is a good entry in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a good life.
Cheers,
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
Your poem makes me wish I had a dog again. They're give so much love and joy in return for walks, attention and dinner, of course! I laughed at "the world is my toilet"! Well done!
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Your poem makes me wish I had a dog again. They're give so much love and joy in return for walks, attention and dinner, of course! I laughed at "the world is my toilet"! Well done!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a cute story about a dog. Sounds like the puppy might have had a rough start to his life. The dog seems like he is finally happy in his new home with dog parents that are going to be good to him and the rest of his life
Well done
Cecilia
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This is a cute story about a dog. Sounds like the puppy might have had a rough start to his life. The dog seems like he is finally happy in his new home with dog parents that are going to be good to him and the rest of his life
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are obviously a dog lover and care very much for them. Dogs are our friends and they offer us unconditional love and we in return should respect them and love them. I enjoyed your magical poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x
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You are obviously a dog lover and care very much for them. Dogs are our friends and they offer us unconditional love and we in return should respect them and love them. I enjoyed your magical poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a heartwarming story showing Zoie's perspective! You've captured a dog's thoughts and feelings with such wit. I loved the line "Fight, play, poop, pee, the world is my toilet". So much fun to read and so enjoyable. Great job!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This is a heartwarming story showing Zoie's perspective! You've captured a dog's thoughts and feelings with such wit. I loved the line "Fight, play, poop, pee, the world is my toilet". So much fun to read and so enjoyable. Great job!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thanks, and she says thanks also,
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun offering for the contest here offering humor and warmth midst your stanzas... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-) ;-)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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A fun offering for the contest here offering humor and warmth midst your stanzas... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-) ;-)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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We all should have the same lives our loved ones enjoy. They give more than they ask for.
Comment from lancellot
Interesting, free verse bio from a dog's Point of view. I think this entry will stand out, it works well for the contest, and people on FanStory love dogs.
I would suggest going over the lines and the punctuations. Too many end with commas, then the next begins with a capital letter. That will confuse some.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Interesting, free verse bio from a dog's Point of view. I think this entry will stand out, it works well for the contest, and people on FanStory love dogs.
I would suggest going over the lines and the punctuations. Too many end with commas, then the next begins with a capital letter. That will confuse some.
Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thanks, as I have many to tell me what to do. Just wag my tail, what's next.
Comment from royowen
I think of all the animals we have owned, or rather, who've owned us, they have never ceased to charm us, love us, in the most attractive, unconditional way, they outline to us how we should love our neighbours, this is delightful, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I think of all the animals we have owned, or rather, who've owned us, they have never ceased to charm us, love us, in the most attractive, unconditional way, they outline to us how we should love our neighbours, this is delightful, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thanks, you always have helped me. Zoie came to me as a gift from God. Took me 2 days to convince her to come to me. She is a star now.
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Well done
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I am a dog at heart, just give me all the love I deserve.
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Of course
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They have given me love from day one, Had the medical talent to save many.
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Of course
Comment from Nicki.B
This was so enjoyable, I have a little doggo and I was just imagining him thinking those things you've written, we always speak in home about being curious about what goes on in a dogs mind. I think you have pretty much summed it up here lol! Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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This was so enjoyable, I have a little doggo and I was just imagining him thinking those things you've written, we always speak in home about being curious about what goes on in a dogs mind. I think you have pretty much summed it up here lol! Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thanks, I know dogs inside and out as I am a small animal Veterinarian. Dogs know everything about me, know my smell, know whats on my mind. I saved many, lost too many, they know I tried my best to save them.