Pons Meets Scar
a script9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love Pons and Ned, but two of each? I think I'm in heaven!! LOL. This is such a funny script, Bill. The concept of cloning is becoming very real, and Hed is the only licenced cloner in town!! Love it! The last lines are hilarious! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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I love Pons and Ned, but two of each? I think I'm in heaven!! LOL. This is such a funny script, Bill. The concept of cloning is becoming very real, and Hed is the only licenced cloner in town!! Love it! The last lines are hilarious! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, Sandra.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. It's good that Ned doesn't have "bird ends" and came up with a pretty good name for Oscar Kilo. Hed should have used his head to write up a contract before cloning.
this ficas plant for one. (ficus)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Lol. It's good that Ned doesn't have "bird ends" and came up with a pretty good name for Oscar Kilo. Hed should have used his head to write up a contract before cloning.
this ficas plant for one. (ficus)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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I finally changed ficus. : )
Comment from nomi338
Uh oh, it is beginning to look like the wheels are in danger of falling off this vehicle that appears to be heading for a crash into the big old building called check your ego at the door.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Uh oh, it is beginning to look like the wheels are in danger of falling off this vehicle that appears to be heading for a crash into the big old building called check your ego at the door.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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If one thinks he's the smartest person in the room, well, at least he's thinking.
Comment from kahpot
"Pons and Hed tretreat" not sure if this is meant to be, I don't think it fits this wonderful lingo, the ending of this script is very humorous, still love the characters, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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"Pons and Hed tretreat" not sure if this is meant to be, I don't think it fits this wonderful lingo, the ending of this script is very humorous, still love the characters, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Fixed those. Thanks, kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written script and for the scene and I looked forward to seeing the next saying that you have to offer us. May you have a lovely week and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This is a very nicely written script and for the scene and I looked forward to seeing the next saying that you have to offer us. May you have a lovely week and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia
Comment from judiverse
I'm surprised Pons is going along with the cloning idea. I imagine cloning would be a pretty expensive business, so Hed should offer some kind of payment schedule or get Biden to forgive the debt. He forgives (and forgets) lots of things. It's strange that people would want to be cloned. I wonder what makes Hed a qualified cloner. Witty dialogue. Word use is clever, like Ned's bird ends. judi
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I'm surprised Pons is going along with the cloning idea. I imagine cloning would be a pretty expensive business, so Hed should offer some kind of payment schedule or get Biden to forgive the debt. He forgives (and forgets) lots of things. It's strange that people would want to be cloned. I wonder what makes Hed a qualified cloner. Witty dialogue. Word use is clever, like Ned's bird ends. judi
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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If you can accept the premise, the bit is easier to swallow. I saw a funny cloning film once where a guy cloned himself and his clones cloned themselves until the genetic drain rendered imperfect clones.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Cloning another human being is an interesting concept. This story has a lot of potential, but remember, you show more than you tell in a screenplay. You can also download a screenplay template online to help format it.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Cloning another human being is an interesting concept. This story has a lot of potential, but remember, you show more than you tell in a screenplay. You can also download a screenplay template online to help format it.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Maria
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Hi, Maria. I do use the site's format when it's a competition, as they are so strict on the framing.
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I know.
Comment from BethShelby
These are always clever. I think about half the people who go down rabbit holes for their news, believe making clones is about that simple. They think everyone in government has a clone. They always showing picture and pointing out slight differences and saying that wasn't him. It was his clone.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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These are always clever. I think about half the people who go down rabbit holes for their news, believe making clones is about that simple. They think everyone in government has a clone. They always showing picture and pointing out slight differences and saying that wasn't him. It was his clone.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This is the fantasy clone making deal.
Comment from JEVEL
Well-written and quite interesting. I like that you made it humorous. It's a good take on the cloning issue, which is a bit confusing, in general. Your plot certainly makes it seem feasible.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Well-written and quite interesting. I like that you made it humorous. It's a good take on the cloning issue, which is a bit confusing, in general. Your plot certainly makes it seem feasible.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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If only -- right?
