Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Average

This is a beautiful poem. I like the line, "silent beauty all around" That line fits this poem. There is something about fresh snowfall that makes the scene tranquil and peaceful.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 07-Dec-2024

Monica,

You're welcome.

Cecilia

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Snow does have a peaceful feeling about it, and much life survives beneath it, so it is a blanket, an excellent haiku, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing.

Comment from Patrick Bernardy

Excellent

Hello!

*****I have pledged to rate in accordance with the criteria outlined on the Q&A page. I will award 4-stars based solely on grammar and lack of proofreading, never on content or creative choices.*****

I love the image of "Earth's comfy blanket" as your last line. I think you may have left some extra wording in the poem that you need to remove. Great job, and good luck in the contest!

Patrick

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing.