BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Thoughts of You"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, yay!! I love the emotional bent my crazy twist introduced... a great follow-on to the blonde being a bit 'off the rails'! ;) ;) Thanx so much for sharing that versatile pen, Lady June! ;) Yvette
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Oh, yay!! I love the emotional bent my crazy twist introduced... a great follow-on to the blonde being a bit 'off the rails'! ;) ;) Thanx so much for sharing that versatile pen, Lady June! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
A most romantic addition to this Renga collaboration. Obviously, your word choices match the selected artwork!
Like your link between waves and drowning, but 'bathing' may be a subtle alternative.
Mark
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A most romantic addition to this Renga collaboration. Obviously, your word choices match the selected artwork!
Like your link between waves and drowning, but 'bathing' may be a subtle alternative.
Mark
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I was ready to add chapter 30 and you beat me to it LoL Our book is growing fast.... that is great news.
Excellent chapter for our renga book. Thank you for participating. Good syllables count and connections between lines. You created a beautiful presentation and word imagery. Good Renga Poem composition. Well done!
Gypsy
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I was ready to add chapter 30 and you beat me to it LoL Our book is growing fast.... that is great news.
Excellent chapter for our renga book. Thank you for participating. Good syllables count and connections between lines. You created a beautiful presentation and word imagery. Good Renga Poem composition. Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
Some say drowning is a peaceful way to go, but your kind of drowning surely would be, a beautiful 7-7 for the renga book, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Some say drowning is a peaceful way to go, but your kind of drowning surely would be, a beautiful 7-7 for the renga book, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
I like the thought of being drowned in one's own thoughts, but not quite being drowned in one's own tears, but it's thoughtful pondering that resolves and decides what action to take, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I like the thought of being drowned in one's own thoughts, but not quite being drowned in one's own tears, but it's thoughtful pondering that resolves and decides what action to take, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Great continuation of the Renga poem. I liked the addressing of the loved one with the memories which spark memories that overwhelm the narrator. I liked the connection of waves of thoughts and the "drowning" in those waves.
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Great continuation of the Renga poem. I liked the addressing of the loved one with the memories which spark memories that overwhelm the narrator. I liked the connection of waves of thoughts and the "drowning" in those waves.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024