Without Words
What matters is what the heart hears...6 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a lovely 2-4-2 poem. The words flow nicely. The picture compliments the poem and give the reader a visual as they read the poem.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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What a lovely 2-4-2 poem. The words flow nicely. The picture compliments the poem and give the reader a visual as they read the poem.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your positive review!!!
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Trina Layne
Congrats on your writing! This is beautiful. Great image in the background and a very good attempt at this short-poetry form. I wish you all the best with this entry.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Congrats on your writing! This is beautiful. Great image in the background and a very good attempt at this short-poetry form. I wish you all the best with this entry.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you. As the four stars indicates there is room for improvement or there are errors, could you please specify which of these issues has earned the four vs. five star review?
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Most welcome. For me, it was the word choice 'love's sigh'. It wasn't fully resonating. Nevertheless, it's still a great entry.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. The syllable counts are correct. This has a lovely, romantic message in only 6 words. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. The syllable counts are correct. This has a lovely, romantic message in only 6 words. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review and encouraging comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Lovers making up with whispers of love can create magical moments and memories and I enjoyed your endearing words here for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Lovers making up with whispers of love can create magical moments and memories and I enjoyed your endearing words here for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your review and encouraging words.
Comment from Kahlani
This is a beautifully written poem that makes me sigh with happiness. You have captured the essence of love in only a few words. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem that makes me sigh with happiness. You have captured the essence of love in only a few words. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your review and encouraging words.
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You're welcome 😊
Comment from kahpot
Yes, volume is not needed when words of love are from the heart, as you so very well express in this beautiful short love poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yes, volume is not needed when words of love are from the heart, as you so very well express in this beautiful short love poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your review and encouraging words.