Lettica Meets Her match
Two of a Kind20 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Karen,
What and awesome story. Letty is super smart. I wouldn't want to be that much of a brainy person. I like how you add in there that we are all being watched. Now that we have all these smart devices we it's easier for them to watch us. I always tell my smart TV to F-off.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Karen,
What and awesome story. Letty is super smart. I wouldn't want to be that much of a brainy person. I like how you add in there that we are all being watched. Now that we have all these smart devices we it's easier for them to watch us. I always tell my smart TV to F-off.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I have a flip phone. All my computers have a bandaid over the camera slot. I saw it in a movie.:-)
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Karen,
They are still listening and following us anyway. They did it before all this technology it was just a little harder for them. I'm a veteran and I say bring it on.
Cecilia
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You are braver than me sweetie pie. Karen
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Karen,
What are they going to do to me? It's still a free country for now. Even if it wasn't I'd do the same thing. I'm not going down without a fight. I'm a rebel I always have been.
Cecilia
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:-)
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my! What a pair. And another pair of brilliant ones are on their way. I guess this is a standalone story? I guess it's not related to the one about the aunt and the niece discovering about the secret crimes of justice?
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Oh my! What a pair. And another pair of brilliant ones are on their way. I guess this is a standalone story? I guess it's not related to the one about the aunt and the niece discovering about the secret crimes of justice?
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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A brand new out of the box story. The Aunt Margaret stories are good, but they take the starch out of me sometimes. I need a palate cleanser. And, I left it open ended so I can do more later. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting and fun beginning for what will probably be a novel. Smart girl, smart mother, and now two smart little twins to figure out life and living. Best wishes for the continuation.
Wendy
Edit: needs consistency between Lettica and Letticia, one or the other.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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An interesting and fun beginning for what will probably be a novel. Smart girl, smart mother, and now two smart little twins to figure out life and living. Best wishes for the continuation.
Wendy
Edit: needs consistency between Lettica and Letticia, one or the other.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I will go back and edit. Thanks for the head's up. The twins will be fun to write for. Karen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Those ladies are two very interesting characters. You could write a whole book about them and their special talents. Two suggestions: skip the quote marks in paragraph two if you are going to talk about what "she" thought (in third person). Also: Every(day) day . . .
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Those ladies are two very interesting characters. You could write a whole book about them and their special talents. Two suggestions: skip the quote marks in paragraph two if you are going to talk about what "she" thought (in third person). Also: Every(day) day . . .
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I will go check these edits. thank you for the catch. I set it up so I can go back if I want to. We shall see. The Aunt Margaret stories are good but are heavy to write. So I take breaks between stories now. :-)
Comment from jim vecchio
I assume you will write more about this situation. Wicca is a subject I don't deal with, but this mother and daughter seem to be very familiar with it. By the way, I also dream in color. You should win an award for your weird characters.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I assume you will write more about this situation. Wicca is a subject I don't deal with, but this mother and daughter seem to be very familiar with it. By the way, I also dream in color. You should win an award for your weird characters.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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It is set up so I can. Thanks for the read. the world is full of odd critters. I love naming my people. :-)
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And I love you're unique characters.
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I really don't know where the people come from. I guess I grow them from movies, tv, and books , and mix and match. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, ma'am, what usually happens when an old boy starts poking a little fun at you. He pokes, and you take it serious. Then before you know it, those little seeds turn into little duplicates, either of one of you, or each other in your case. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Yes, ma'am, what usually happens when an old boy starts poking a little fun at you. He pokes, and you take it serious. Then before you know it, those little seeds turn into little duplicates, either of one of you, or each other in your case. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Lettica, is happy with her girls. So is her momma. They are not smarter than her, but those two together gave her fits while she was pregnant. They already have their own language though. We will just have to see what kind of smarts they have.:-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, we know this story is set to run and run! You've created two great characters who are going to make their fortunes from these paranormal experiences. Some edits below, Karen. And best to try and keep to one tense rather than keep switching from past to present. But a story full of characteristic humour and imagination which always seems to flow as though it's following its own direction. Well done! Debbie
So some of them (were) left behind with no clue how to find the rest of themsel(ves).
Even with her big brain she (couldn't) answer that..
My mother said: (")Excuse me. My daughter is having an epileptic fit."
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Well, we know this story is set to run and run! You've created two great characters who are going to make their fortunes from these paranormal experiences. Some edits below, Karen. And best to try and keep to one tense rather than keep switching from past to present. But a story full of characteristic humour and imagination which always seems to flow as though it's following its own direction. Well done! Debbie
So some of them (were) left behind with no clue how to find the rest of themsel(ves).
Even with her big brain she (couldn't) answer that..
My mother said: (")Excuse me. My daughter is having an epileptic fit."
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I corrected all the tenses. And the other edits.Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed your story. That is lot of very intelligent people. Twin girl as smart as Letty. She would have a lot on her hands to deal with. You seem to find a lot of red-haired girls for you stories. This on looks like the cartoon you use for your profile.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed your story. That is lot of very intelligent people. Twin girl as smart as Letty. She would have a lot on her hands to deal with. You seem to find a lot of red-haired girls for you stories. This on looks like the cartoon you use for your profile.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Everyone is asking if that is me. I feel like all these characters are part of me. And I have looked like quite a few of these people at different ages. I am a red head with pale skin and green eyes. This was a hoot to do. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from royowen
With twins in tow it's amazing that anyone would have anytime at all, mind you it depends on the hyper activity of the twins. I love this, delving into the mysticism stuff, it can be dangerous business, funny thing, God makes sure they can't act against people that don't want them. Beautifully written Karen, blessings Roy
Typo : Have the (piece) and joy. Peace?
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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With twins in tow it's amazing that anyone would have anytime at all, mind you it depends on the hyper activity of the twins. I love this, delving into the mysticism stuff, it can be dangerous business, funny thing, God makes sure they can't act against people that don't want them. Beautifully written Karen, blessings Roy
Typo : Have the (piece) and joy. Peace?
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much. I appreciate diving in to many different things. But my humor rears it's buttinski head all the time. I think that further stories would havemore humor than intrigue. Karen
Comment from GWHARGIS
This didn't go where I thought it was going. I liked the curve of this. Very explicit details and good show of personality. I enjoyed this very much. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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This didn't go where I thought it was going. I liked the curve of this. Very explicit details and good show of personality. I enjoyed this very much. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. I didn't know where it was going when I started. I stopped for a while, I couldn't feel it. It was just words. But this morning , I came across it again. and I had it. Twin girls with all the complications it will bring. Life is just life. :-)