A shining light
Birth of Jesus35 total reviews
Comment from Trina Layne
Thanks for sharing this special truth about the meaning of Christmas. Congratulations on your entry and I hope it does well. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Thanks for sharing this special truth about the meaning of Christmas. Congratulations on your entry and I hope it does well. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from nomi338
You know, there is all types of controversy surrounding the date or season in which he was born. Obviously he had to be born in order to accomplish the mission he was sent on. None of that even matters very much. It was his death that means everything. Had his death not occurred in the way that it did, his life would not have meant nearly as much. We dare not forget that important fact. Nice write.
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You know, there is all types of controversy surrounding the date or season in which he was born. Obviously he had to be born in order to accomplish the mission he was sent on. None of that even matters very much. It was his death that means everything. Had his death not occurred in the way that it did, his life would not have meant nearly as much. We dare not forget that important fact. Nice write.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Aussie
If only all the World worshipped Him. We love Him because He first loved us. There are so many false religions, and pagan gods, that the Jews don't think of Him as the Messiah, only a holy man. Thanks for sharing Yahwey's birthday.
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If only all the World worshipped Him. We love Him because He first loved us. There are so many false religions, and pagan gods, that the Jews don't think of Him as the Messiah, only a holy man. Thanks for sharing Yahwey's birthday.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from bob cullen
How delightful to read a Christmas poem that tells the real story. Santa Claus is good, but the Good Lord is the reason we are here. And He offers the ultimate purpose for life, an Eternal Reward. Beautifully written Willie. And thank you for delivering the truth.
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How delightful to read a Christmas poem that tells the real story. Santa Claus is good, but the Good Lord is the reason we are here. And He offers the ultimate purpose for life, an Eternal Reward. Beautifully written Willie. And thank you for delivering the truth.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Gunner Lil
A nice poem just in time for the season.
An easy read that has a great flow and a very good pace.
Also a great picture of Christ.
Thank you for sharing.
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A nice poem just in time for the season.
An easy read that has a great flow and a very good pace.
Also a great picture of Christ.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
A powerful message in the beautiful Christmas poem you've penned Willy. He is our Shining Light and the reason for this beautiful season.
Well done and Merry Christmas.
Janet
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A powerful message in the beautiful Christmas poem you've penned Willy. He is our Shining Light and the reason for this beautiful season.
Well done and Merry Christmas.
Janet
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from TPAC
Amen to that. I found this read mounted with explosive attributes pleasing at least to me. The ryhmns compelling as well to my interests. Merry Christmas to you. My brother name was Willie Smith: how about that.
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Amen to that. I found this read mounted with explosive attributes pleasing at least to me. The ryhmns compelling as well to my interests. Merry Christmas to you. My brother name was Willie Smith: how about that.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm so sorry I'm late coming here, Willie! This is a lovely Christmas message that conveys the true meaning and importance of the season rather than the commercialisation of it. Your verse is a fluent and lyrical read which touches the heart. Well done, Willie! Warmest wishes Debbie. PS Just a small edit in the first stanza - Chri(s)tmas
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I'm so sorry I'm late coming here, Willie! This is a lovely Christmas message that conveys the true meaning and importance of the season rather than the commercialisation of it. Your verse is a fluent and lyrical read which touches the heart. Well done, Willie! Warmest wishes Debbie. PS Just a small edit in the first stanza - Chri(s)tmas
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from elainec4
Your work is both timely and on target. I admire your use of rhyme. I have trouble using it--always have. Thanks for sharing your ideas and ability.
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Your work is both timely and on target. I admire your use of rhyme. I have trouble using it--always have. Thanks for sharing your ideas and ability.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem is penned, reminding your readers of the reason for Christmas, the celebration of the birth of Jesus Christ, who comes to as a saviour to this world of sins. You did a great work here, concise and complete in its message. Well done, dear for sharing the true essence of Christmas. Good luck in the contest.
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Your poem is penned, reminding your readers of the reason for Christmas, the celebration of the birth of Jesus Christ, who comes to as a saviour to this world of sins. You did a great work here, concise and complete in its message. Well done, dear for sharing the true essence of Christmas. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024