BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "~ Winter Storm ~"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
7 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Togetherness is a wonderful and safe way to beat of the cold, an excellent follow up of June's 5-7-5 renga, and addition to the book, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Togetherness is a wonderful and safe way to beat of the cold, an excellent follow up of June's 5-7-5 renga, and addition to the book, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Nice follow-up to June's Renga post.
Do like the northern lights image and the way you contrasted 'winter' and 'warm memories,' I can imagine them cuddling and
sharing a hot cocoa in front of the fireplace.
Mark
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
Nice follow-up to June's Renga post.
Do like the northern lights image and the way you contrasted 'winter' and 'warm memories,' I can imagine them cuddling and
sharing a hot cocoa in front of the fireplace.
Mark
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kindwords.Have a wonderful weekend ☺️
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love this... i like the juxtaposition between a chilly winter storm outside and the warm memories inside - and the knocking on the door was a nice touch
smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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love this... i like the juxtaposition between a chilly winter storm outside and the warm memories inside - and the knocking on the door was a nice touch
smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
Yours is a nice poem about winter. This is an excellent follow-up of June's poem.
The top photo is hauntingly beautiful; the bottom one, of the auroras, is the bright light of winter. (They're one of the nice things about Spring. Christmas is the other.
Good luck to the writers of your book,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
Yours is a nice poem about winter. This is an excellent follow-up of June's poem.
The top photo is hauntingly beautiful; the bottom one, of the auroras, is the bright light of winter. (They're one of the nice things about Spring. Christmas is the other.
Good luck to the writers of your book,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I like the presentation and consistent theme of this Renga poem and I think having a clear reference of the preceding Renga was clever. Thank for posting this beautiful poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I like the presentation and consistent theme of this Renga poem and I think having a clear reference of the preceding Renga was clever. Thank for posting this beautiful poem.
RJ
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. With renga poems, following and linking stanzas is essential.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Love the contrast between the chill of the weather outside and the warmth of the memories inside. Excellent imagery of the knocking on the door, evoking winter's intrusiveness. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Love the contrast between the chill of the weather outside and the warmth of the memories inside. Excellent imagery of the knocking on the door, evoking winter's intrusiveness. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
This is a fun thread that has been coursing through this Renga book - the cold outside and the warmth inside of love and warm memories. Another great 7-7 for the book!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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This is a fun thread that has been coursing through this Renga book - the cold outside and the warmth inside of love and warm memories. Another great 7-7 for the book!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Yes, June and I are going to steer the renga to spring soon. I thought we were already in winter but it doesn't start until December 21st.
Thank you very much, big sister😊
Love,
Marival ❤️
