One Year to Gold
A Merry~go~Rhyme for Sally and Jack Law43 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Debi,
I'm sooooo sorry I missed this poem. I had meant to review it Sunday and then it got buried. Oh my gosh, this is such a well written poem. You can tell you love the subject, lol. Seriously, you could have won a contest with this one. It's well written, personable and unique. You reached all my emotions with this post and I'm so very sorry I missed it. Consider it a 6!!!!
Love and hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Debi,
I'm sooooo sorry I missed this poem. I had meant to review it Sunday and then it got buried. Oh my gosh, this is such a well written poem. You can tell you love the subject, lol. Seriously, you could have won a contest with this one. It's well written, personable and unique. You reached all my emotions with this post and I'm so very sorry I missed it. Consider it a 6!!!!
Love and hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Rhonda, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
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It was a brilliant poem!!
Comment from Bill Schott
What a tremendous salute and history lesson of sally and Jack as they greet this forty-ninth anniversary. They are the example of endurance of love and faith which we all wish to emulate. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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What a tremendous salute and history lesson of sally and Jack as they greet this forty-ninth anniversary. They are the example of endurance of love and faith which we all wish to emulate. Beautiful.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Wow, Bill, I am so touched and I cannot tell you how much your awesome review and kind words mean for Sally and Jack's poem. Thanks ever so much for the six stars too, my awesome friend. I know Jack and Sally will appreciate you as much as I do. Thank you and I just want you to know that come the first of the year I wont be writing as much and I will get your way again. So, thanks again!!!! Love,Debi
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debi,
My wife and I will celebrate our 50th next September 13th. We share our wedding year (1975) with Sally & Jack. They are quite a team, aren't they? Jack is Sally's hero, deservedly so. They support each other.
Nicely penned! So good of you to put their story into rhyme.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Debi,
My wife and I will celebrate our 50th next September 13th. We share our wedding year (1975) with Sally & Jack. They are quite a team, aren't they? Jack is Sally's hero, deservedly so. They support each other.
Nicely penned! So good of you to put their story into rhyme.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hey Kimbob, I thank you so very much for the awesome as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from shad blunt
Thank you for your share and the music from your heart that I may find my pot of gold. Love the Bee Gees. Smile today, you have given me some gold to enrich my life of words from another. Always, Shadrach
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your share and the music from your heart that I may find my pot of gold. Love the Bee Gees. Smile today, you have given me some gold to enrich my life of words from another. Always, Shadrach
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hey Shadrach, yes, some of my favorite music too.
I thank you so very much for the sweet as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
I just read Sally's poem for Jack. 49 years is quite a testament to their love and devotion to each other. Your poem shined a light on the fact that life has its ups and downs and celebrations and heartbreaks. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I just read Sally's poem for Jack. 49 years is quite a testament to their love and devotion to each other. Your poem shined a light on the fact that life has its ups and downs and celebrations and heartbreaks. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Gretchen, yes, it was hard to write in about the deaths of babies for me, but she wanted to give them attention. So it was important to Sally and I understood that.
I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
Great artwork and nice presentation, Debi. You put a lot of work into the poem, photos, and videos. You always do a great job putting facts into a poetic form with rhyme. A good opening verse about how they met. If I was in Buffalo, I'd go somewhere warmer, too. I am sorry about the difficult situations in their lives, but there is also love and joy. Reaching the Golden Anniversary is an amazing accomplishment. Congratulations, Sally and Jack, on reaching that milestone in the New Year. Thanks for sharing everything, Debi, and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to everyone.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Great artwork and nice presentation, Debi. You put a lot of work into the poem, photos, and videos. You always do a great job putting facts into a poetic form with rhyme. A good opening verse about how they met. If I was in Buffalo, I'd go somewhere warmer, too. I am sorry about the difficult situations in their lives, but there is also love and joy. Reaching the Golden Anniversary is an amazing accomplishment. Congratulations, Sally and Jack, on reaching that milestone in the New Year. Thanks for sharing everything, Debi, and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to everyone.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Gosh Pam, I always appreciate you. The fact that you mentioned that you notice the photos. Thank you for that and everything else that you almost alone notice. You are amazing!!
I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi. I appreciate your reply very much. Lotsa love is sent back to you.
Comment from Tim Margetts
So then, Debi.
I no sooner review one of your celebratory tribute poems than I get another.
You know, it is a fact that one can only give so many superlatives before I run out of things to say LOL.
Once again an excellent selection of songs to compliment the wonderful words.
Tim x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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So then, Debi.
I no sooner review one of your celebratory tribute poems than I get another.
You know, it is a fact that one can only give so many superlatives before I run out of things to say LOL.
Once again an excellent selection of songs to compliment the wonderful words.
Tim x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Oh Tim, how you crack me up, hahahaha!
I thank you so very much for the awesome as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from karenina
One of your very best...
Such finesse with every line fourteen syllables and impeccably rhymed!
We adore Sally, of courses COURSE!
SHE is so deserving of this loving, comprehensive, verse!
Take a bow DPM.
Bravo!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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One of your very best...
Such finesse with every line fourteen syllables and impeccably rhymed!
We adore Sally, of courses COURSE!
SHE is so deserving of this loving, comprehensive, verse!
Take a bow DPM.
Bravo!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This shows you how behind I am that I even have most appreciated six stars that get shuffled in with the new ones and lost, but never forgotten. So thank you so for this beautiful review and for all the sweet words. I know for a fact that Sally appreciated it too. Love you dearly and thank you again!! Love, Debi
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I'm SURE she was beaming!
Who wouldn't be?
:)
Comment from NanaGaye
What a lovely story, great rhyming. Interesting format which of course you handled perfectly. Love the music your have selected . Love and best wishes NanaGaye (enjoying arrival of our summer,and it's pretty HOT)
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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What a lovely story, great rhyming. Interesting format which of course you handled perfectly. Love the music your have selected . Love and best wishes NanaGaye (enjoying arrival of our summer,and it's pretty HOT)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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You Sweetie Pie, I thank you as always for being the best, Gaye. Thanks so much for the kind words for Sally and Jack and their poem. You are so special and I appreciate your six stars so much. Love, Debi
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well sis, I don't know if I've ever heard of a merry-go-rhyme poem before. Thanks for the explanation of what needed to be done, now I know you did it perfectly. I know Jack and Sally and all their family appreciate the kindness that you've shown them in this wonderful celebration of their great life together. I pastored for10 years in Orlando and I may have been close to them but certainly would not have known it. Thanks again for constantly giving us new insight into our FanStory family.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Well sis, I don't know if I've ever heard of a merry-go-rhyme poem before. Thanks for the explanation of what needed to be done, now I know you did it perfectly. I know Jack and Sally and all their family appreciate the kindness that you've shown them in this wonderful celebration of their great life together. I pastored for10 years in Orlando and I may have been close to them but certainly would not have known it. Thanks again for constantly giving us new insight into our FanStory family.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Dan, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate the gift of six stars too, so much, my dear brother. Lotsa love, Debi