Barefoot In The Rain
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Rachel is the voice of reason, but Kendra's heart is not being reasonable. Should she drop what she has and possibly lose it altogether, or try for something uncertain and possibly lose that also?
I know the answer, because I know my favorite writer. There is going to be a happy ending. I'm smiling already.
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Rachel is the voice of reason, but Kendra's heart is not being reasonable. Should she drop what she has and possibly lose it altogether, or try for something uncertain and possibly lose that also?
I know the answer, because I know my favorite writer. There is going to be a happy ending. I'm smiling already.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, this is a fine continuation to the book. Ethan obviously doesn't remember Kendra, but there seems to be a spark. Kendra feels guilty because of James and rightfully so. A big hug, Ulla xcx
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Hi Carol, this is a fine continuation to the book. Ethan obviously doesn't remember Kendra, but there seems to be a spark. Kendra feels guilty because of James and rightfully so. A big hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
I think you do a brilliant job of exploring Kendra's emotions in these scenes, Carol and they really make her feel like a real person. I'm really interested to see where you take her next. Another excellent chapter.
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I think you do a brilliant job of exploring Kendra's emotions in these scenes, Carol and they really make her feel like a real person. I'm really interested to see where you take her next. Another excellent chapter.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from karenina
Good gravy Marie! Kendra has only seen James a few times! Rachel needs to back off a little...
Why is it men can date four women at once and it's fine, but heaven forbid a single woman have an interest in two of whom she's in any way committed to and the push is on!
Grrrr.
Have fun, Kendra! Do what your heart says and quiet the naysayers!
(Phew! I had to get that off my chest!)
Hmm.
I wonder how you'll be wrapping this up!
Karenina
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Good gravy Marie! Kendra has only seen James a few times! Rachel needs to back off a little...
Why is it men can date four women at once and it's fine, but heaven forbid a single woman have an interest in two of whom she's in any way committed to and the push is on!
Grrrr.
Have fun, Kendra! Do what your heart says and quiet the naysayers!
(Phew! I had to get that off my chest!)
Hmm.
I wonder how you'll be wrapping this up!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Kendra really is between a rock and a hard place. She seems to like James, but she isn't dreaming about a future with him. She has been obsessed with Ethan, but can she really fit into his world? Vanessa has proved to her that she might have a hard time fitting into the world of the rich and bitchy.
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Kendra really is between a rock and a hard place. She seems to like James, but she isn't dreaming about a future with him. She has been obsessed with Ethan, but can she really fit into his world? Vanessa has proved to her that she might have a hard time fitting into the world of the rich and bitchy.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Wendy G
She's very confused, and understandably so. She needs to see more of Ethan to find out if the spark is the precursor to friendship and love, but with Vanessa hovering, and not holding back, that's hard to do. James deserves her love - he is a good and fine man, but love can't be forced.
Well written chapter, maintaining the interest.
Wendy
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She's very confused, and understandably so. She needs to see more of Ethan to find out if the spark is the precursor to friendship and love, but with Vanessa hovering, and not holding back, that's hard to do. James deserves her love - he is a good and fine man, but love can't be forced.
Well written chapter, maintaining the interest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
I must without a plot, either ambiguous in nature, or walking a thin line, and I'm not sure about the implications of either, and plot is a lead balloon, and you seem to have mastered the art of the romantic, but life can be like that, I can remember dead end crushes I had. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I must without a plot, either ambiguous in nature, or walking a thin line, and I'm not sure about the implications of either, and plot is a lead balloon, and you seem to have mastered the art of the romantic, but life can be like that, I can remember dead end crushes I had. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a great chapter. I had a feeling especially when he showed up on the patios. It's sad for Kendra that Ethan doesn't remember that he met her Kendra on the train. Now what is she going to be up too.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a great chapter. I had a feeling especially when he showed up on the patios. It's sad for Kendra that Ethan doesn't remember that he met her Kendra on the train. Now what is she going to be up too.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's Friday, or is it, and I seldom to almost never have any stars left past Monday or so. But these last two chapters certainly deserved all the star that can be given. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter!
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It's Friday, or is it, and I seldom to almost never have any stars left past Monday or so. But these last two chapters certainly deserved all the star that can be given. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good chapter! Rachel has good advice, but she's a bit pushy. Perhaps it's what Kendra needs, however. The warning about a safety plan probably means you're going to throw in a super-duper twist. LOL! Hugs! Carol
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Good chapter! Rachel has good advice, but she's a bit pushy. Perhaps it's what Kendra needs, however. The warning about a safety plan probably means you're going to throw in a super-duper twist. LOL! Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024