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Can men perceive?

A poem.

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Comment from lyenochka
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Praise to our faithful God Who always has such love and grace to save even if our fallen minds stubbornly refuse to see Him. It makes it so hard to share the gospel with some. I especially liked:
"Our minds in grooves can be conformed,
our fortress holed, defences stormed."

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from June Sargent
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The fruitage of God's spirit can help us become the best version of ourselves. But for that to happen, we need to allow God's spirit to flow in our hearts. It's a choice.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from kahpot
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We can enjoy trying new things and being adventurous, knowing we do have our Father looking out for and protecting us, an excellent read and message, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from jim vecchio
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There are talented men who have thought of and accomplished great things, but in perspective, they are nothing compared to the doings of our Lord. Our thoughts cannot compare to His.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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God gives us free will. We can make the choice to follow Him, or we can make the choice to dwell within ourselves. I choose God as my guiding light. Thank you for sharing your inspiration with us.

faith for.souls to know no fear. (stray period where a space should be)

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from RJ Heritage
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We are given the fruits of the spirit in which we can make the choice to dwell or not. We can also choose to trust our own minds explicitly and fall, for as we well know this is the way of man. Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Only when our heart opens to the Lord will we ever fully understand the blessings we have been given and that our senses work to our best advantage when we listen and allow the Lord to guide us.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from Sugarray77
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Well done Roy! I love this form that you executed perfectly. The theme that man can think and reason was valid and kept me interested in how you brought your thoughts together in sequence and logic. :)

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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So often in this world today, men are so bent on doing things their own way, and not depending on God to help them with the difficulties and with the challenges that lay before them. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best for the new year. Patricia

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Roy,

This is a great poem. God has given us all the senses and some people hardly use them. You for instance have been blessed with poems. You have a very creative mind.

My muse has left the building again as I continue to grieve.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024