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BOOK OF RENGA POEMS

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Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Gypsy, my friend. Happy New Year! I hope it's your best one yet! The fox in the henhouse is about to get a rude awakening. I would mention that in your title, shouldn't it be 'raise'? Have a lovely first day of the year!

Melissa

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Thanks! I fixed it.

    Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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My first review of the year, and this is an excellent place to start! I loved this one. Fox's can be a pest to farmers, in this one, it goes away hungry. I've just written a follow up which I hope is right! Happy New Year, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much, may you have a year full of prosperity, good health, love, and good writings.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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aww cute little foxy fox...

hens rise a hoopla <-- i think this should be "hens RAISE a hoopla" - may want to check it out...

other than that a great renga with cool imagery

thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Thank you big sister. Melissa told me it's 'raise' as well and it's fixed now.

    Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.

    Love,

    MariVal
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Hens Rise a Hoopla, has the proper formatting and reminds us, if not the fox, that squawking chickens sounds are always followed by buckshot.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.

    Gypsy hugs