BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Hens Raise a Hoopla"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
4 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy, my friend. Happy New Year! I hope it's your best one yet! The fox in the henhouse is about to get a rude awakening. I would mention that in your title, shouldn't it be 'raise'? Have a lovely first day of the year!
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
Hello Gypsy, my friend. Happy New Year! I hope it's your best one yet! The fox in the henhouse is about to get a rude awakening. I would mention that in your title, shouldn't it be 'raise'? Have a lovely first day of the year!
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thanks! I fixed it.
Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
My first review of the year, and this is an excellent place to start! I loved this one. Fox's can be a pest to farmers, in this one, it goes away hungry. I've just written a follow up which I hope is right! Happy New Year, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
My first review of the year, and this is an excellent place to start! I loved this one. Fox's can be a pest to farmers, in this one, it goes away hungry. I've just written a follow up which I hope is right! Happy New Year, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, may you have a year full of prosperity, good health, love, and good writings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww cute little foxy fox...
hens rise a hoopla <-- i think this should be "hens RAISE a hoopla" - may want to check it out...
other than that a great renga with cool imagery
thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
aww cute little foxy fox...
hens rise a hoopla <-- i think this should be "hens RAISE a hoopla" - may want to check it out...
other than that a great renga with cool imagery
thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you big sister. Melissa told me it's 'raise' as well and it's fixed now.
Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Hens Rise a Hoopla, has the proper formatting and reminds us, if not the fox, that squawking chickens sounds are always followed by buckshot.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
This 5-7-5, Hens Rise a Hoopla, has the proper formatting and reminds us, if not the fox, that squawking chickens sounds are always followed by buckshot.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs