Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm glad I read this, I was wondering what happened to Ruth, but it seemed the little girl should be looked after by Luke, that is my wish, but then, it's your story, I have daughters you see, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thanks Roy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

For some reason this posted twice. You might want to contact Tom and get it fixed so you get credit for all of your reviews. Sometimes FanStory messes up.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thanks for telling me. Appreciate that

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi Stan,
A great start to the new year!! You've produced another chapter about our poor Luke who has had some unfortunate turns of events in his life. In love with one woman, he has to face a mail order bride and her daughter, and now he's losing her after the death of the bounty hunter.

Engaging story with a lot of human aspects.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thanks for everything

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

An interesting story true to the stated genre.
As a fan of westerns since just a child I enjoyed this chapter.
So many deaths went unpunished and this seems like it may fit that
outcome. Clear, concise writing with focus and intent clear.
An enjoyable read.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thanks! I appreciate hearing from someone I haven't meant. I've been kicking around for awhile. Appreciate it.