Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I expect even animals appreciate calm blue moons, especially in the summer season when the skies are clear, I enjoyed your endearing poem Lisa, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think it's an amazing thing to be able to dream, the philosophers have been thoughtfully tried to set we humans apart from the other creatures, but our self awareness sets us apart, well done Lisa,, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

reply by royowen on 07-Jan-2025

Most we3lcome

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Lisa. This is just lovely and the artwork is stunning... it really adds and is so appropriate for your story!! I also enjoyed reading your heartfelt words... they flowed with meaning and thoughtfulness. A wonderful write.

Melissa

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Drifting lazily through the mind and losing ones self beneath the stars and the glorious moon. Now, that's exactly where I would want to be. And the crackling fire glowing in the dark. Touches all the senses.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Lovely addition to the book of renga. I'm glad you joined to keep this going. It's fun to see the different perspectives on this thread. Love the artwork as well.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-line poem, Sweet Dreams, has the proper formatting and speaks to the magic and freedom experienced in the light of the biggest moon of the year.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I am happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines. Do you mind adding the author notes below? Thank you :)

Gypsy

***** PLEASE COPY AND PASTE THE RULES TO YOUR AUTHOR NOTES *****

HOW TO WRITE A RENGA POEM:

It's very important to LINK your Renga stanza to the previous stanza keeping the same theme and season of the year.

First copy and paste this link to your browser to check the Renga Book. Your chapter will follow the last chapter:

fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=42337

FIRST POET - starts with a three-line haiku 5/7/5 that sets the theme and season of the year.

THE SECOND POET writes a 7/7 stanza that links to the previous 5/7/5 chapter with the same theme and season of the year.

This pattern (5/7/5 stanza followed by a 7/7 stanza) continues on and on. Some renga books can be 100 stanzas or more.

To post your chapter, scroll down the renga poem page you are reading. Above the review box click on ADD CHAPTER.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

The simplicity is thus poems strength. How we'd all like to relax in such a way. You have written an excellent poem for the Renga book and have also created am analogy with animals and humans. I enjoyed your image presentation and your well chosen words too. Best wishes, Alex

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for the great review.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 07-Jan-2025

You're welcome!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

These Renga poems continue and will be creating quite a magnificent book by now. Yours, Lisa, is beautifully atmospheric and dreamy and makes me want to be with them under that majestic blue moon. Well done! Warm wishes Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for the great review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is another well written chapter for the multi author book and I very much enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good and I wish you the very best for all your year. May God grant you your fondest wishes. Patricia.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for the great review.