BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Red butterfly"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
15 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yes this is beautiful and the butterfly's body lies in the middle. Clever. I'm an artist too and I recall you may be. Red and Green are complimentary colors. I am thinking you knew that. This poem and image support each other, perfectly. Wonderful work, Alexandra :)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Yes this is beautiful and the butterfly's body lies in the middle. Clever. I'm an artist too and I recall you may be. Red and Green are complimentary colors. I am thinking you knew that. This poem and image support each other, perfectly. Wonderful work, Alexandra :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work email and a nice review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery creates
a good word picture of the butterfly,
including its color and its flight.
-A very good concluding line.
-Very well done; have a great day!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery creates
a good word picture of the butterfly,
including its color and its flight.
-A very good concluding line.
-Very well done; have a great day!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Your reviews are always special thank you so much
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You are very welcome, and I am glad you enjoy them.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. I love red and I think this is a great transition from the wolfs and elks to butterflies. The red ones are definitely very bold and the wings are gorgeous. Where did you get the artwork? It's so clear and beautiful.
Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Yes. I love red and I think this is a great transition from the wolfs and elks to butterflies. The red ones are definitely very bold and the wings are gorgeous. Where did you get the artwork? It's so clear and beautiful.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. I got the artwork from a friend on Facebook who is been putting up butterfly photos.
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I added a new 7/7 and also used the red color.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Patricia, what a beautiful butterfly...
I have never seen one like this...I bet it
is beautiful in flight...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and
so love your picture...very nicely written...
love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Hi Patricia, what a beautiful butterfly...
I have never seen one like this...I bet it
is beautiful in flight...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and
so love your picture...very nicely written...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am grateful when I get nice reviews like this. Thank you so much, Linda.
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Thank You sweet girl...
and your so very welcome...
love you...xxoo 🤗❤️🙏🌼
Comment from evilynne
That is a lovely poem about a lovely creature. I am not familiar with the book and hope to check it out soon. The butterfly pictured is lovely. Evi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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That is a lovely poem about a lovely creature. I am not familiar with the book and hope to check it out soon. The butterfly pictured is lovely. Evi
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Evi for a nicenice review
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Indeed simply beautiful in photo and in words is this red butterfly. You describe it's bold beauty in such an amazing poetic gesture. I like to see more butterflies in my community.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Indeed simply beautiful in photo and in words is this red butterfly. You describe it's bold beauty in such an amazing poetic gesture. I like to see more butterflies in my community.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I am happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
Suggestion:
Lovely, butterfly (Delete the comma: lovely butterfly
Red creature flying boldly
On beautiful wings
Please add the book notes to your author notes. They are at the bottom of this review box.
It's very important to link the renga poems, please check the previous verse in the future.
Thank you!
Gypsy
NOTES TO COPY AND PASTE TO YOUR AUTHOR NOTES
HOW TO WRITE A RENGA POEM:
It's very important to LINK your Renga stanza to the previous stanza keeping the same theme and season of the year.
First copy and paste this link to your browser to check the Renga Book. Your chapter will follow the last chapter: fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=42337
FIRST POET - starts with a three-line haiku 5/7/5 that sets the theme and season of the year.
THE SECOND POET writes a 7/7 stanza that links to the previous 5/7/5 chapter with the same theme and season of the year.
This pattern (5/7/5 stanza followed by a 7/7 stanza) continues on and on. Some renga books can be 100 stanzas or more.
To post your chapter, scroll down the renga poem page you are reading. Above the review box click on ADD CHAPTER.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
Suggestion:
Lovely, butterfly (Delete the comma: lovely butterfly
Red creature flying boldly
On beautiful wings
Please add the book notes to your author notes. They are at the bottom of this review box.
It's very important to link the renga poems, please check the previous verse in the future.
Thank you!
Gypsy
NOTES TO COPY AND PASTE TO YOUR AUTHOR NOTES
HOW TO WRITE A RENGA POEM:
It's very important to LINK your Renga stanza to the previous stanza keeping the same theme and season of the year.
First copy and paste this link to your browser to check the Renga Book. Your chapter will follow the last chapter: fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=42337
FIRST POET - starts with a three-line haiku 5/7/5 that sets the theme and season of the year.
THE SECOND POET writes a 7/7 stanza that links to the previous 5/7/5 chapter with the same theme and season of the year.
This pattern (5/7/5 stanza followed by a 7/7 stanza) continues on and on. Some renga books can be 100 stanzas or more.
To post your chapter, scroll down the renga poem page you are reading. Above the review box click on ADD CHAPTER.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the nice review
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Patricia,
I really like your poem. The photo of the scarlet butterfly, and the beautiful simplicity of your poem. Do butterflies come out in the winter in Arizona? PA's butterflies are somehow staying warm under the frigid ground.
Cindy
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Patricia,
I really like your poem. The photo of the scarlet butterfly, and the beautiful simplicity of your poem. Do butterflies come out in the winter in Arizona? PA's butterflies are somehow staying warm under the frigid ground.
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate
Comment from jim vecchio
Another great salute to butterflies! I don't think you needed a comma after "lovely". Thank you for another peek into God's wonderful world of nature. Hope you have more prepared for us.
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Another great salute to butterflies! I don't think you needed a comma after "lovely". Thank you for another peek into God's wonderful world of nature. Hope you have more prepared for us.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews from you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Butterflies do fly boldly and bring peace to all who see them. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. I enjoyed reading and viewing.
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Butterflies do fly boldly and bring peace to all who see them. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. I enjoyed reading and viewing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Your views are always special
