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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your book really pulls me into the life of this ranch family. Paul's views views on the ranch's future really adds to the family's journey. I also like how you create a sense of tension with Doolin and the gang. Keeping that mystery just enough in the background to keep me very curious!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
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Your book really pulls me into the life of this ranch family. Paul's views views on the ranch's future really adds to the family's journey. I also like how you create a sense of tension with Doolin and the gang. Keeping that mystery just enough in the background to keep me very curious!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Charles,
Another fine chapter in this ever evolving book. You are doing a great job retelling this story. I hope for all our sakes the Doolin gang is caught before they find there way to Texas. I have a feeling you haven't seen the last of them yet.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Charles,
Another fine chapter in this ever evolving book. You are doing a great job retelling this story. I hope for all our sakes the Doolin gang is caught before they find there way to Texas. I have a feeling you haven't seen the last of them yet.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from Elias Noor
This story is a strong foundation for a historical saga, blending family legacy with the looming threat of outlaw violence. The authentic depiction of ranch life and law enforcement grounds the narrative, while the looming conflict with the Doolin Gang adds suspense. With clearer relationships, refined sentence flow, and more direct conflict, this story has the potential to be a gripping and heartfelt tale of survival, duty, and family in post-war Texas.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This story is a strong foundation for a historical saga, blending family legacy with the looming threat of outlaw violence. The authentic depiction of ranch life and law enforcement grounds the narrative, while the looming conflict with the Doolin Gang adds suspense. With clearer relationships, refined sentence flow, and more direct conflict, this story has the potential to be a gripping and heartfelt tale of survival, duty, and family in post-war Texas.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you. For better understanding, the manuscript can be found in my portfolio. I have been writing these sags for fifty tears, published several. Something I love doing. I write and read only clean sagas, hope you find mine the same, Sending blessings your way.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I hope the Doolin gang doesn't come this direction either, but I am worried about it. I really like this story.
ranch would stay the same.The Source of sharing the profits with all of us was our savings for retirement, if I lived to reach the mark. (space needed after the period & source)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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I hope the Doolin gang doesn't come this direction either, but I am worried about it. I really like this story.
ranch would stay the same.The Source of sharing the profits with all of us was our savings for retirement, if I lived to reach the mark. (space needed after the period & source)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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OK. Thanks, Barb.
