Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Seeing the aurora borealis is one my bucket list. I really want to see it in all its glory. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. You and your family remain in my prayers.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

So perceptive, Gypsy! It's really as though the elk too is caught up in that ice sculpture of time standing still. A magical read. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I very much admire the ice sculptors I have had the privilege of watching them perform live, from a block of ice they make art, very much the same as you do from a blank page, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh cool little three liner
so the elk is frozen?
interesting...
smooth flow
nice imagery
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

No, the elk is not really frozen, it's for poetic effect.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Beautiful but oh no. Did the elk freeze? I'm slow to understand sometimes. Such a beautiful creature and poem which takes a sad moment and transforms it.

I enjoyed reading this, Alexan :)

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

No it's just a visual effect.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 11-Jan-2025

Oh good. You're welcome! Hugs 😊 Alexan

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Well written and beautifully illustrated. Gives me thoughts to what mysteries lie beneath the ice, and when to be revealed. This format is a very nice format. Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I guess that's what 'frozen' images are, something that is frozen by one's mind, like a painting, or a photo, that's why that artwork image is perfect to suit your poem, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

reply by royowen on 11-Jan-2025

Pleasure