Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

And now joined by his brothers and sisters in this stunning scene. I hope they can all stay together for warmth and momentum. Sun-facing slop(e)s. Warm wishes Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Fixed it! I appreciate your help.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh cool -- i like the imagery of sun-facing slushy snow...
great continuation of the frozen elk
but shouldn't the frozen one be after this one - he didn't find shelter? LOL

great-liner
cool imagery
smooth flow
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Nice poem and imagery to match for your presentation. I'm not sure but there may be a spelling error you will want to note. I think you might have meant to write slopes instead of slops? Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Hi! Glad to see your poem.

This is another beautiful poem and presentation for your Renga book. You use the correct syllables and emotion, which the photo helps to convey. It's thought provoking too.

A note:
Possibly you meant slopes, instead of slops.

Thinking of you,

Alexan

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊