Tabitha
In The Attic - 717 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What wouldn't children give to live the lives of Quinn and Jordan to be translated to a foreign land of witches, sorcerers, fairies, gnomes and other other strange, and to set the captive fairies free, well done, blessings Roy
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What wouldn't children give to live the lives of Quinn and Jordan to be translated to a foreign land of witches, sorcerers, fairies, gnomes and other other strange, and to set the captive fairies free, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm always a sucker for happy endings no matter how they come about. And since I'm just a big old kid anyway, I love traveling to foreign places, and you do it so well. Thanks for sharing.
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I'm always a sucker for happy endings no matter how they come about. And since I'm just a big old kid anyway, I love traveling to foreign places, and you do it so well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a wonderful story of living entities helping others against the forces of a group of bad entities. You have shown all kinds of living imaginative beings fighting for a good cause with the help of two humans. Jordan and Quinn are very different although they are brother and sister. Jordan is shown as a leader determined to leap in and help. Quinn is more willing to follow but he gets the good ideas that save the day. Good pairing of child heroes.
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This is a wonderful story of living entities helping others against the forces of a group of bad entities. You have shown all kinds of living imaginative beings fighting for a good cause with the help of two humans. Jordan and Quinn are very different although they are brother and sister. Jordan is shown as a leader determined to leap in and help. Quinn is more willing to follow but he gets the good ideas that save the day. Good pairing of child heroes.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I'm with Quinn except I would stay under the covers.
Love the big oak tree with the tiny door.l so many lovely descriptions and I could easily see this with artwork as well. Good to see Quinn coming into his own as well. Great read Carol.
Cheers
Valda
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I'm with Quinn except I would stay under the covers.
Love the big oak tree with the tiny door.l so many lovely descriptions and I could easily see this with artwork as well. Good to see Quinn coming into his own as well. Great read Carol.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Karen Cherry
Good writing.They need to ask their grandma about the mirror at some point. Perhaps their grandma has some trouble and they ask the fairies for help. You never know. 25% here, how about you? Karen
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Good writing.They need to ask their grandma about the mirror at some point. Perhaps their grandma has some trouble and they ask the fairies for help. You never know. 25% here, how about you? Karen
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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I'm thinking along the lines of the grandmother looking ofr the children and sees the mirror.... she enters into the Forest and then something happens...but I've got a few other stories to tie together first
Smiles, Carol
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See, great brains think alike.
Love to you, drip your faucets and bundle up. Karen
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another great tale about Jordan and Quinn working as a team and freeing their friends from evil magic. This is a great story and hope it keeps going. I am looking forward to more.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
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Carol,
Another great tale about Jordan and Quinn working as a team and freeing their friends from evil magic. This is a great story and hope it keeps going. I am looking forward to more.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This was a delightful story to listen to. You have told it so well I felt like I was with those twins as they were going through this adventure it was very intriguing and it kept me engaged the whole way through. I wish you the very best with your writing because you are a wonderful writer. May God bless you and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia
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This was a delightful story to listen to. You have told it so well I felt like I was with those twins as they were going through this adventure it was very intriguing and it kept me engaged the whole way through. I wish you the very best with your writing because you are a wonderful writer. May God bless you and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Another awesome chapter, Carol.
I love the way you are developing this world of adventures.
This absolutely needs to become a complete book of stories wrapped up in the tale of their summer at Grandmas house.
Tim x
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Another awesome chapter, Carol.
I love the way you are developing this world of adventures.
This absolutely needs to become a complete book of stories wrapped up in the tale of their summer at Grandmas house.
Tim x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from karenina
I'm becoming fond of the enchantment in this magical place. Your descriptions are rich and vivid and I felt drawn in to the perilous plans of Tabitha.
Great lessons here as well! Trust your gut, work together, accept help, and I saw some critical decision making on Quinn's part!
Jordan is listening to him more and he's very clever finding that bar, remembering the sorcerers powder and using the crystal he'd found to unlock the lock!
Evil can be overcome! Follow the light!
Karenina
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I'm becoming fond of the enchantment in this magical place. Your descriptions are rich and vivid and I felt drawn in to the perilous plans of Tabitha.
Great lessons here as well! Trust your gut, work together, accept help, and I saw some critical decision making on Quinn's part!
Jordan is listening to him more and he's very clever finding that bar, remembering the sorcerers powder and using the crystal he'd found to unlock the lock!
Evil can be overcome! Follow the light!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hi this was a very good story with a happy ending: "he sorcerer chuckled, waved his staff, and with one giant whoosh! - Quinn and Jordan found themselves back in their beds. As their sleepy heads hit their pillows, they each mumbled, "Goodnight." Their dreams were filled with their friends and a successful adventure."
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Hi this was a very good story with a happy ending: "he sorcerer chuckled, waved his staff, and with one giant whoosh! - Quinn and Jordan found themselves back in their beds. As their sleepy heads hit their pillows, they each mumbled, "Goodnight." Their dreams were filled with their friends and a successful adventure."
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
