2025 Favorite Poems
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
What a beautiful poem. The images of Jesus are divine. I love the words you used to describe Jesus.
Glad to see you back. Hope the wildfires are staying away from you. I have been praying for you.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Gypsy,
What a beautiful poem. The images of Jesus are divine. I love the words you used to describe Jesus.
Glad to see you back. Hope the wildfires are staying away from you. I have been praying for you.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
We still have fires but the one close to us is contained and further away. Thank you for prayers.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome my friend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
If we allow ourselves to feel loved by God, we will feel it. I have often, during troubled times, felt the comforting arm of God around my shoulder. He will answer, we just need to believe and be patient. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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If we allow ourselves to feel loved by God, we will feel it. I have often, during troubled times, felt the comforting arm of God around my shoulder. He will answer, we just need to believe and be patient. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the slight rhymes of breeze and reeds with a scent of sea. . .
smooth, calm flow with good line connection and cool imagery -
strong last line - maybe put a dash after the fourth for a slight pause?
just a thought ;)
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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i like the slight rhymes of breeze and reeds with a scent of sea. . .
smooth, calm flow with good line connection and cool imagery -
strong last line - maybe put a dash after the fourth for a slight pause?
just a thought ;)
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Good suggestion. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
The gogyohka, Divine Breeze, has the proper formatting and finds the love of God on the wings of the wind which passes over, through, and around all there is here.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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The gogyohka, Divine Breeze, has the proper formatting and finds the love of God on the wings of the wind which passes over, through, and around all there is here.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-You create a peaceful mood with "divine breeze."
-Effective use of alliteration with "salty sea"
that also appeals to our senses.
-Very good closing lines with a positive message
about His love. Very well done.
-I hope you are doing well. Take care.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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-Very nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-You create a peaceful mood with "divine breeze."
-Effective use of alliteration with "salty sea"
that also appeals to our senses.
-Very good closing lines with a positive message
about His love. Very well done.
-I hope you are doing well. Take care.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm well, thank you. I hope you also are well
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You are very welcome, Gypsy, and I am glad you are doing okay. We are, too, except it is cold.
Comment from RJ Heritage
I identify the Devine breeze as being God's Holy Spirit. To others it might be a different being or thing. Nicely illustrated and presented. Thank you for sharing. Good morning to you.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I identify the Devine breeze as being God's Holy Spirit. To others it might be a different being or thing. Nicely illustrated and presented. Thank you for sharing. Good morning to you.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Yes. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from royowen
On of the most incredible miracles of all, apart from being raised from the dead, was walking on water, then of course the Gifts from the wise men, was gold, frankincense and myrrh, al of which spoke of His divinity, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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On of the most incredible miracles of all, apart from being raised from the dead, was walking on water, then of course the Gifts from the wise men, was gold, frankincense and myrrh, al of which spoke of His divinity, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you
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Well done
Comment from Neonewman
What a wonderful feeling this piece presented, Gypsy. The artwork complimented every word. His love is unmatched by any before or after him. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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What a wonderful feeling this piece presented, Gypsy. The artwork complimented every word. His love is unmatched by any before or after him. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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Always a pleasure, my friend.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I get the meaning of your words. Don't think I'd be interested in writing this format. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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I get the meaning of your words. Don't think I'd be interested in writing this format. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
A great spiritual poem. It's calming. It makes you feel small (in a good way, like you are a part of something big), which is what I imagine God would make one feel in any religion. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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A great spiritual poem. It's calming. It makes you feel small (in a good way, like you are a part of something big), which is what I imagine God would make one feel in any religion. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Yes, all religions are founded on love.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
