Seasons
Each season is a different song.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem to celebrate each season here and welcome it with open arms. I am never positive about the winter season and always look forward to spring. I much prefer these Kyrielle poems to have metre as they sound much more melodic, but I guess this is not required for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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A fine poem to celebrate each season here and welcome it with open arms. I am never positive about the winter season and always look forward to spring. I much prefer these Kyrielle poems to have metre as they sound much more melodic, but I guess this is not required for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thanks for the read and feedback. I never can hear meter. xxx
Comment from Aiona
I like this take on a kyrielle, in which each stanza is a season, and the last line is the repeated line, sort of symbolizing how each season has its own unique qualities. Each line has eight syllables. In the second stanza, I saw one line that seems to have subject-verb disagreement:
"Our hearts pulses with cheerful tune"
The subject is plural, but the verb conjugation is singular.
Other than that, it's a beautiful example of a kyrielle.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I like this take on a kyrielle, in which each stanza is a season, and the last line is the repeated line, sort of symbolizing how each season has its own unique qualities. Each line has eight syllables. In the second stanza, I saw one line that seems to have subject-verb disagreement:
"Our hearts pulses with cheerful tune"
The subject is plural, but the verb conjugation is singular.
Other than that, it's a beautiful example of a kyrielle.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thanks for the read and review. Thanks for the catch. I will edit.
