Fiona's Watchdog
Greta has a plan In The Attic 516 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Now grandma has regained the faith that she had in her youth, and with the fairies encouraged regains her faith and now she immediately becomes young again, and meets William, later they help Frederick the dragon to remove quills from his feet, and he takes them to meet Fiona, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Now grandma has regained the faith that she had in her youth, and with the fairies encouraged regains her faith and now she immediately becomes young again, and meets William, later they help Frederick the dragon to remove quills from his feet, and he takes them to meet Fiona, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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And there is more merriment to come and I am so enjoying writing this.
Smiles, Carol
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Well done
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It is so wonderful that Margaret gets to be young again and see the man she once loved. The three of them work well together and find the dragon is not so fierce. One suggestion: . . . and (set) near an ancient willow. I really am enjoying these Magic Mirrow stories.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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It is so wonderful that Margaret gets to be young again and see the man she once loved. The three of them work well together and find the dragon is not so fierce. One suggestion: . . . and (set) near an ancient willow. I really am enjoying these Magic Mirrow stories.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Me too! What started out to be a short little story has gained a life of its own and I am having fun writing it and teaching life's lessons with a dash of humor.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good tension as Margaret climbs the stairs to the attic then realises, 'they've gone through.' I like that - no wrinkles. No aching joints. as Margaret stepped through. Loved the scene when these old frinds rescued the dragon from the porcupine needles. A great read, Carol.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Good tension as Margaret climbs the stairs to the attic then realises, 'they've gone through.' I like that - no wrinkles. No aching joints. as Margaret stepped through. Loved the scene when these old frinds rescued the dragon from the porcupine needles. A great read, Carol.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Wouldn't that be awesome to step through a mirror and be young again...even if for a short time. And yes Frederick wasn't much of a watch dog...whimpering and wanting attention. He's adorable.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry
OOOOOOOh I wanted more of this story. It is still raining here. Yuck. Cold and wet. Sandra goes in soon for her left eye. I hope the weather gets better for everyone. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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OOOOOOOh I wanted more of this story. It is still raining here. Yuck. Cold and wet. Sandra goes in soon for her left eye. I hope the weather gets better for everyone. Karen
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Yes, I am so happy that Sandra got in earlier than expected. It's been so difficult for her as well as so many others on FS. It's cold and snowing here...I thought we were done with it, but no...snow snow snow. I'm looking for spring.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment from karenina
I agree with Wendy!
As I read this I kept thinking what an incredible movie it would make...for children and all who recall the magic of fairy tales!
This is my favorite chapter and here I am out of sixes early Tuesday morning.
Frederick is a sweet semi ferocious (kinda) dragon...
Love him!
Virtual six million stars!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I agree with Wendy!
As I read this I kept thinking what an incredible movie it would make...for children and all who recall the magic of fairy tales!
This is my favorite chapter and here I am out of sixes early Tuesday morning.
Frederick is a sweet semi ferocious (kinda) dragon...
Love him!
Virtual six million stars!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Maybe someone will come along and be willing to work on it with me at least for illustrations though I too can imagine it as a movie. Matt wasn't ready to jump on board.
Smiles, Carol
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I wish I knew of someone...
Comment from Wendy G
Carol, this needs to be not only a book, but a movie for children (and their adults). Your descriptions are so vivid, and in my mind I see it all - and it's so much better than most of the children's movies around.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Carol, this needs to be not only a book, but a movie for children (and their adults). Your descriptions are so vivid, and in my mind I see it all - and it's so much better than most of the children's movies around.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I would so much love that...I did see a you tube that shows how to illustrate things yourself, but I doubt that I could do it myself and it takes lots of money to get someone interested. Thanks so much, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written chapter. I am so glad they got the quills out of Frederick. I can't wait to see and hear Fiona. Great descriptive words and great imagery my friend. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This is a very interesting and well written chapter. I am so glad they got the quills out of Frederick. I can't wait to see and hear Fiona. Great descriptive words and great imagery my friend. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thanks, Teri. I am having fun with this children's book and thrilled that you are enjoying it too.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Oh, good. I'm happy to see Margaret involved. I love the little dragon. He is a perfect addition to the story. I like this story, Carol. It's like a warm breeze after all the horror and mystery stories on here.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Oh, good. I'm happy to see Margaret involved. I love the little dragon. He is a perfect addition to the story. I like this story, Carol. It's like a warm breeze after all the horror and mystery stories on here.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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That's why I have to write a little of this and a little of that to keep my head on an even keel...which is difficult as I age. LOL I truly am enjoying the In The Attic series with all it's magic and fun. Thoug I do love Eleanor too! Maybe the next book will be a wedding in an English castle and lots of humor and ghosts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
I have been so much enjoying these stories of the saga of Jordan and Quinn in the attic, and I can put myself in the place of Jordan and have my twin brother in the place of Quinn and we identify with what's going on in the story. Now you've entered Margaret and old lady and I'm starting to identify with her as well. This is a wonderfully written story. I appreciate it so much. May you have a wonderful day and a very good week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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I have been so much enjoying these stories of the saga of Jordan and Quinn in the attic, and I can put myself in the place of Jordan and have my twin brother in the place of Quinn and we identify with what's going on in the story. Now you've entered Margaret and old lady and I'm starting to identify with her as well. This is a wonderfully written story. I appreciate it so much. May you have a wonderful day and a very good week. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I am thrilled that you can step into the story and feel as if you and your brother are having the adventure. Makes it even a better story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a great story. How the little fire spitting dragon was afraid is way to funny. I hope Fiona will talk to them and help get the children free before it's to late.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Carol,
This is a great story. How the little fire spitting dragon was afraid is way to funny. I hope Fiona will talk to them and help get the children free before it's to late.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Wow! You are so so very kind, my friend. This story keeps growing on me with seeing the end. I am beyond thrilled that you enjoyed it too. Thank you for the stars.
Just post a flash fiction. Can't wait to hear what you think.
Smiles, Carol
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You are welcome my sister.
