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Lipstick Murder

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After a lifetime of suffering, Tess’s world shatte

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow, madame murder on high kills, strikes again. I guess her list is still growing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thank you for reading my chapter. Yes, Tess is far from done. Unless of course the cops figure it out. Thank you again for reading my chapter and kind wishes, take care.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Thank you for reading my chapter. Yes, Tess is far from done. Unless of course the cops figure it out. Thank you again for reading my chapter and kind wishes, take care.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation all make it a very good piece to listen to as well. May you have a wonderful weekend. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thank you for listening to my story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You have a wonderful weekend as well.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thank you for listening to my story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You have a wonderful weekend as well.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Wow, your chapter had me hooked from the start! Tess is such a fascinating character! I loved how she moved through the party with such charm. That moment with the disguised weapon was brilliant! The tension built up so well. Especially when Emily started questioning things. I can't wait to see what Tess does next. Fantastic work!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thank you for reading my chapter and for your kind review. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Tess is determined to avenge her mother's death.
    Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thank you for reading my chapter and for your kind review. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Tess is determined to avenge her mother's death.
    Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.