Comment from teafor2

Excellent

Roy, your title, picture, theme, tone, notes and verbiage combine to create a clear picture that man/humanity's fate is routed through salvation...If not
for the misstep in the Garden of Eden, man would still be enjoying a sinless stay in that paradise on earth. Thanks for your pious explanation and enlightenment of the sober title. teafor2

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by teafor2 on 14-Mar-2025

You are welcome, Roy. teafor2

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem and supportive photo presentation. It tells a story to which many will relate. Good colorful descriptions. This flows well and there are a lot of truths. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.

God have Mercy on us all. Kyree Eleison!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Alex, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 14-Mar-2025

You're welcome, friend!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your testimony about your priorities and attitudes now that=you have been saved by Jesus from a meaningless and sinful life. He is good.
Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Wendy, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Exceptional

Hi I love this writing. There is simplicity, there is depth and a certain surrender to Him who cam and shed his blood , allowed Himself to be remorselessly treated and crucified.
There is so much in life we cannot explain, that whether we are tested by God, whether sinners are really punished, how do we face the crimes and butchering that are happening, or even do we get anything in being good and forgive those who have ruined our lives.
How do we approach the Nazis heartless crime?
And those who run their cars on the pavement to kill.
Really I do not understand anything, whether it's all the will of God or just...well I do not know.
I can only pray.wherever my prayer ends to!

Bless you. The writing is very worth remembering.
Sorry I forgot to sign my review

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Benny, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Benny Beeharry on 15-Mar-2025

I am glad you liked it.
Stay well
Benny

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025

Blessyou

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

A wonderful poem of faith Roy. I am so counting on that forgiveness. We we are sinners even in the best of times. I count on His saving grace everyday. Thank you for sharing the scriptures and your poem that gives us hope again and again.

Blessings my friend.
Janet

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Janet, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

Hi Roy,
I bet your bible is well read and well worn.
Another well crafted spiritual poem with a clear and thoughtful message for all mankind.
It is indeed comforting to believe faith will guide us to or Creator.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Shirley, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Shirley E Kennedy on 15-Mar-2025

You're very welcome

Comment from Carol Clark2

Exceptional

Beautiful poem, Roy. I love the final couplet, especially wearing 'the grace-won crown.' You laid out the gospel in the Scriptures you chose from Romans, and in the words of your poem. Nicely written. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Carol, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I believe that it is a gift that our sins and fallouts are forgiven, though sometimes wonder about the greater sins of some people, I guess that is not for me to ponder, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Kahpot, so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello Roy,
thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem with us. As our days on earth wind down, I'm hoping that more and more people come to the realization that we desperately need God to do for us what we can't do for ourselves. Well done.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Tom , so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is a good faith-based poem with good rhyme and meter. It is an interesting thought to think we forge our own chain in life. Hopefully it leans more toward Matthew 6:20 to lay up treasure in heaven or the other awesome verses you quoted in the notes.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Crystie, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy