Men from Mars~Women from Venus
Just a Silly Fictional about not wanting to be opposite sex50 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a lovely spoof Debi and I am glad you wrote it. You have such a wonderful fun playful way of addressing many different subjects, many different ways and bringing all of it to a delightful conclusion. I would agree with the conclusion you have come to. Leave things as they God knows best and it is best for us as well. Thanks for sharing sis.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This is a lovely spoof Debi and I am glad you wrote it. You have such a wonderful fun playful way of addressing many different subjects, many different ways and bringing all of it to a delightful conclusion. I would agree with the conclusion you have come to. Leave things as they God knows best and it is best for us as well. Thanks for sharing sis.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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As always, Dan, you are so wise. Thanks for all the awesome comments about this silly poem. You make complete sense. Thanks so much for all the stars you brought with for us to swing on. LOL
Much love, bro! Debi
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
I enjoyed the poem. The cursive writing was a little blurred. I can see how the differences of the two genders played out. This is hard to have conflict within a poem. IT was simple yet profound.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed the poem. The cursive writing was a little blurred. I can see how the differences of the two genders played out. This is hard to have conflict within a poem. IT was simple yet profound.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Hi Kristen, sorry this is kind of late, but I do appreciate your very kind review and such thoughtful comments. Thanks so much.
Love, Debi
Comment from Dawn Munro
"Instead of swinging on the porch, we're swinging from the stars..."
What a closing line, Debi Pick Marquette! I have to admit, your sweet poem is making me a little envious. *smile*
xxoo Dawn
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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"Instead of swinging on the porch, we're swinging from the stars..."
What a closing line, Debi Pick Marquette! I have to admit, your sweet poem is making me a little envious. *smile*
xxoo Dawn
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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You are so sweet, Dawn. Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and the kind comments. Love, Debi
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Debi!
This was fun and your omitted letters made me laugh. The rhymes were spot on. It appears that you had fun with this prompt.
I enjoyed reading your poem and your presentation was perfect. I see nothing that I would change.
Kim
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Hi Debi!
This was fun and your omitted letters made me laugh. The rhymes were spot on. It appears that you had fun with this prompt.
I enjoyed reading your poem and your presentation was perfect. I see nothing that I would change.
Kim
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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You are so sweet, Kim. I wasn't sure about using that line, but it was a good rhyme and went well with the prompt. LOL. It just wasn't like me.
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and the kind comments.
Love, Debi
Comment from Stacy M.S.
Oh my, I absolutely love that last line...that is so perfect and beautiful and reminiscent of a happy relationship.
I like how you have captured the differences, almost like an opposites attract.
I also enjoy the endearing way you describe the husband...very honest but not complaining.
This poem also flows so well, it's almost sing song.
Perfectly done!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Oh my, I absolutely love that last line...that is so perfect and beautiful and reminiscent of a happy relationship.
I like how you have captured the differences, almost like an opposites attract.
I also enjoy the endearing way you describe the husband...very honest but not complaining.
This poem also flows so well, it's almost sing song.
Perfectly done!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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You are so sweet, Stacy. I wasn't sure about doing this one but people are certainly on board with it. Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and the kind comments. Love, Debi
Comment from Karen Cherry
Some guys can't handle strong smart women. My husbands all said they liked my toughness, and ability to handle most everything, and then they married me and thought I would turn into Hanna subserviant housewife. Odd. True intelligent men do not need us to be less so they can be more. Enjoy the good weather. Karen
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Some guys can't handle strong smart women. My husbands all said they liked my toughness, and ability to handle most everything, and then they married me and thought I would turn into Hanna subserviant housewife. Odd. True intelligent men do not need us to be less so they can be more. Enjoy the good weather. Karen
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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You are so right, Karen. Thank you so much for the cute review.
Love, Debi
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debi,
The first verse and the audible laugh it created set this poem up perfectly. I can thoroughly understand the reasoning behind such a dislike:>)
Yes Debi, loved the humour as it danced down the page with ease... magic!
With our thoughts we create...
our own lane.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Hi Debi,
The first verse and the audible laugh it created set this poem up perfectly. I can thoroughly understand the reasoning behind such a dislike:>)
Yes Debi, loved the humour as it danced down the page with ease... magic!
With our thoughts we create...
our own lane.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Hahaha, thanks James. You mean you aren't wondering if I have a warped sense of humor? I must have changed every line fifty times. Except the P__s one. I wrote that in the beginning and never touched it. I figured if anyone was upset about it I would have to deal with it at the time, but nobody said a word. LOL.
Thanks, dear friend for always giving me a smile and for being so darn sweet. I appreciate you so much. Not to mention, it is so good to see you.
Thanks again. Love ya, Debi
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very thoughtful, concise and aptly written poem well suited to the stated topic.
You didn't have to win me over for I feel quite comfortable in my feminine self.
It's interesting to see your point of view from both sides.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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A very thoughtful, concise and aptly written poem well suited to the stated topic.
You didn't have to win me over for I feel quite comfortable in my feminine self.
It's interesting to see your point of view from both sides.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Haha, thank you, Shirley. You sound a lot like me. We are happy just the way we are, so we don't feel the need to change anything. Right?
Thanks for the fun and kind comments, my dear friend.
Thanks again; love, Debi
Comment from jessizero
I had a hard time reading this poem because of the font, but I like how the font went with the content. I really liked this piece. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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I had a hard time reading this poem because of the font, but I like how the font went with the content. I really liked this piece. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Jessi, I am sorry about that. I guess because I can expand everything on my iPad I don't realize it.. even with only one eye, I can make it so big. And I suppose it doesn't help all the color on the black?
For some reason I am just not a fan of plain printing because that is all we used for years on typewriters, y'know? Thanks for letting me know and I will try to make it bigger too for now on. Maybe that will make a difference too. Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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It looks fine the way it is! :)
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Thanks Jessi.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Debi, I really like this poem. The different colors are a neat idea. It was funny especially the one part. I agree. I wouldn't want to be a man. Well written. I'm happy being a woman. Can anyone do this?
Also, I want to thank you for helping me write poems. Using 8 syllables definitely works. I think I'm getting better at it. I just wrote. I didn't post it yet. Probably tonight. Love, your friend, Brenda
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Hi Debi, I really like this poem. The different colors are a neat idea. It was funny especially the one part. I agree. I wouldn't want to be a man. Well written. I'm happy being a woman. Can anyone do this?
Also, I want to thank you for helping me write poems. Using 8 syllables definitely works. I think I'm getting better at it. I just wrote. I didn't post it yet. Probably tonight. Love, your friend, Brenda
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank a million, my friend. I will look for your poem tonight. Just remember getting the right syllables is only part of it. I am writing a birthday poem right now and there are a lot of big words to try to use and get the meter right.
I am using 14 syllables like in this one and it's about getting the right words in the right place. LOL
Thanks for all the very nice words for this poem, Sweetie. I will be watching for your poem. Love, Debi
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I don't understand meter
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