Trouble In Red
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6 total reviews
Comment from Jim Wile
You've done a great job continuing the story, Lori. I like the direction you've taken with it. Will Ethan be seduced by this beauty to become a hitman for her? I somehow doubt it, but it will be interesting to find out.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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You've done a great job continuing the story, Lori. I like the direction you've taken with it. Will Ethan be seduced by this beauty to become a hitman for her? I somehow doubt it, but it will be interesting to find out.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thanks Jim! It was interesting how Carol wraps it all up in chapter 15.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hi Lori,
This chapter was fantastic. I'm sorry I'm just finding out there was a Chapter 14 to this story. Carol started a new project called Emerald Isle, and I saw that you are writing the second chapter and had written a chapter for Trouble in Red.
I love all the creative detail you included, which seems to tie all the major aspects of the story together. I look forward to your talent in Emerald Isle.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Hi Lori,
This chapter was fantastic. I'm sorry I'm just finding out there was a Chapter 14 to this story. Carol started a new project called Emerald Isle, and I saw that you are writing the second chapter and had written a chapter for Trouble in Red.
I love all the creative detail you included, which seems to tie all the major aspects of the story together. I look forward to your talent in Emerald Isle.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much!! Yeah, I think people saw chapter 15 and didn't realize 14 was new too. So I really appreciate your positive review.
I'm brainstorming right now what to do for chapt 2. I'll is doing chapt 3—you game for a chapter? Hope so and if so
PM Begin Again.
Comment from Neonewman
Great job, Lori. I love secret doors and "Far Away Joe's" is the perfect place for them. They were probably installed during the prohibition. Lol.
Ethan's heart went from an adrenaline rush to cardiac arrest. I loved this particular line. There is fantastic imagery here, my friend, bravo.
I also love that, Mama George was in love with her rival.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Great job, Lori. I love secret doors and "Far Away Joe's" is the perfect place for them. They were probably installed during the prohibition. Lol.
Ethan's heart went from an adrenaline rush to cardiac arrest. I loved this particular line. There is fantastic imagery here, my friend, bravo.
I also love that, Mama George was in love with her rival.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thanks Steve!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. One part confused me. I thought this entire story started off with Little Miss Shortcake meeting Ethan in a restaurant.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. One part confused me. I thought this entire story started off with Little Miss Shortcake meeting Ethan in a restaurant.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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That turned out to be Carla, I thought disguised as Shortcake. Honestly, I got a little confused myself but I'm pretty sure I read that somewhere.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
You did a great job of picking up where Steve left off. One question is bugging me. Wasn't Mickey O'rourke a 90's movie star who later got a bad face lift? lol Maybe it's just my mind going. Waiting to see where we end up next. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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You did a great job of picking up where Steve left off. One question is bugging me. Wasn't Mickey O'rourke a 90's movie star who later got a bad face lift? lol Maybe it's just my mind going. Waiting to see where we end up next. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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It was Mickey Rourke and yes, he got a horrible face lift. Thanks for the upbeat review!
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ohhhh he was missing the O' lol ok got it
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Yep :-)
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo, Lori...Perfect way to bring it all around front and center... There's no one else in line at the moment so I'll toss in another chapter and see if we get any takers. Thank you for a wonderful chapter. You made it easy for me to follow.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Bravo, Lori...Perfect way to bring it all around front and center... There's no one else in line at the moment so I'll toss in another chapter and see if we get any takers. Thank you for a wonderful chapter. You made it easy for me to follow.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much and I look forward to your chapter. Do you think it is time to start veering towards a conclusion?
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My chapter kind of does that, I think. It leaves it open subtly, or it could be the ending. I'd love to do this again, though.
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I would love to do this again! Thanks so much for leading and organizing this project! You also are amazing at writing the noir genre. I learned a lot! Lori
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thank you...My novel is about to wrap up so maybe I will think up another idea unless you have something in mind. I thought it was fun.
Smiles, Carol
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I don't have anything in mind but would be happy to be a sounding board before you release it, if you would like. Pls DM if you're interested in that.
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Sure I am always open to new ideas and where we can have fun....Looking for a picture so I can post my chapter ....
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Yay, can't wait to read it!
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Just posted!
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Just read and commented!!! Loved it so much! You're a wiz at this! I'm ready for the next one whenever you are!
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What way shall we go...I'm not good at sci-fi but I know others are. You see ghosts (like Eleanor) and mysteries are my style, but what do you think you and others would like? I;m always ready to go...
Smiles, Carol
