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Watcher at the Window

Whats in the window

22 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry
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We come across odd stuff all the time. We do not have to always understand stuff 100%. Stuff goes over my head all the time. I survive. I believe in a great many things.
I believe right now I have to go to the bathroom :-)
Nice poetry. Karen

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
    Karen,

    Thank you for the great review. It is a spirit trapped in the house. I believe in ghost, my grandfather's house was haunted and I could tell you some stories.

    Cecilia
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
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I really enjoyed this poem. The rhyming was perfect. I am wonder what the entity is. Is it something all in your head or was there really a stranger in the night? I'm guessing it was all in the person's head. There was a strong introduction to this poem. Nice work.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
    Kirsten,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. That was am entity in the window looking out. A spirit stuck in the house.

    Cecilia
reply by Kirsten Shonle on 18-Mar-2025
    ah. A spirit. That makes sense
Comment from kahpot
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Well, this is creepy, I am not sure what I would do in this situation, but praying for it to go away would be one thing, great artwork choice for this wonderful club challenge, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Kahpot,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. It was a fun poem to write. If I saw that in the window I would run the other way.

    Cecilia
Comment from Janet Foor
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Watcher at the Window is a scary little poem. I think I would definitely be scared if I saw that ghostly image staring at me.
You did a nice job with the club entry.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Janet,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. If I saw that staring at me I would be running the other way. LOL

    Cecilia
Comment from evilynne
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That is very very creepy. The poem is well written, rhymes and reads well. It could give you nightmares (just kidding)! The picture is great! I wish you the best luck with your club entry!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Evi,

    Thank you very much for the great review. I had fun with this one and it was easy to write.

    Cecilia
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Was line six supposed to be... I'm not sure I know what "you" reap for if it was I than I would think you would know what you were going to reap, no?
And another think isn't this the same release you did yesterday. it seems as if I read it then.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Tom,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. The poem is written the way I intended. Who knows what you reap. This is the first release on this poem for me. Perhaps, you read somebody else's from the same club.

    Cecilia
Comment from Tim Margetts
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Great poem, Cecilia.
I have read a few of these based on the picture now, it is a very eerie image indeed.
You bring into the verse, your own unease and emotion, this is good.
Tim x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Tim,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. This was a fun one to write. I guess I am a little twisted. LOL

    Cecilia
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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A great entry for the contest you nailed it with this entry. I liked the last stanza the best
You need to take your leave now
I don't know when or how
I'm going to make you leave
All I have to do is believe

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Jake,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. I had fun with this one and was able to write a good poem.

    Cecilia
Comment from Rick Gardner
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This vision will never leave me, will see this in my grave. Believe me this scares me, have enough visions to see, now this one and your words top the list. It says everything that is to be said. I like the flowers better.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Rick,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. You are a funny guy. I got into writing this poem. I like the weird and bizarre.

    Cecilia
Comment from Charles D Ezell
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Trying to catch up om reading your and others work. Have had a few health problems but coming back to our group. Good post I see nothing wrong . Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
    Charles,

    Thank you for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.

    Cecilia