Too Many Boyfriends
false accusations ... hard at any age!28 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
Well hello there!!! All this time of reading your wsork, minus the last yrs I wasn't here, I thought you were single, with all these boyfriends, lol kidding. What a fast paced poem turned in to a stage act. You always did like to write for the stage. Glad you are still here. later Guess you never got message for any posts yet?
lulube
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Well hello there!!! All this time of reading your wsork, minus the last yrs I wasn't here, I thought you were single, with all these boyfriends, lol kidding. What a fast paced poem turned in to a stage act. You always did like to write for the stage. Glad you are still here. later Guess you never got message for any posts yet?
lulube
Comment Written 07-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2025
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Hey Lu - good to see you! Honestly, I’m not on FS much these days, so may well have missed your posts completely. Glad u caught this one of mine! Thx for the lovely sixer!! I’m action a show opening this week, so life has been crazy busy!!! (So what Jess is new, right)?
:):):) Sharyn
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I've only been back a couple of weeks. trying to get the groove on again. been playing in the dirt heavily these last 2 yrs and dealing with my 1 pond thats been leaking for 3 yrs. thats a whole lot of another story. Congrats on another show entertaining those that love theatre. chat later when you write about it.
lulube
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:)
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
This-is-so-hilarious! I love the originality of combining several forms of prose and poetry , and that last line is just the best. I am sure the line is loooooooooong! Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This-is-so-hilarious! I love the originality of combining several forms of prose and poetry , and that last line is just the best. I am sure the line is loooooooooong! Well done!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Hahaha -of COURSE it is, Anna! :):):)
Comment from Rhonda Hiser
I absolutely love this! You go girl! Seventy-two and a new you! Using Spock and Capt Kirk from the original Star Trek is priceless! Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I absolutely love this! You go girl! Seventy-two and a new you! Using Spock and Capt Kirk from the original Star Trek is priceless! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank u Rhonda! I have every intention of taking your advice, GF!! :):):)
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I loved this poem so witty and wry humor about growing old and thinking back on imaginary boyfriends on TV. I love your star trek references as I am a treckie too
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I loved this poem so witty and wry humor about growing old and thinking back on imaginary boyfriends on TV. I love your star trek references as I am a treckie too
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Oh no!! Not ANOTHER TREKKIE!
THX JAKE! :):):)
Comment from Nicki.B
This was so much fun to read! A complete lyrics different style poem, very unique and free style and I love that it's not all structured and metered it's got fun and character.
All of the star trek references throughout was really cool and funny.
Good luck with the contest, I must say this is a strong runner!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This was so much fun to read! A complete lyrics different style poem, very unique and free style and I love that it's not all structured and metered it's got fun and character.
All of the star trek references throughout was really cool and funny.
Good luck with the contest, I must say this is a strong runner!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thx so much, Nikki! :)
Comment from royowen
Yep, love is still a decision, even when the attraction is strong, we can never be owned by anyone, we join ourselves in partnership in the pledge of marriage, but it is an EQUAL partnership, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Yep, love is still a decision, even when the attraction is strong, we can never be owned by anyone, we join ourselves in partnership in the pledge of marriage, but it is an EQUAL partnership, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thx Roy!!! :)
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Pleasure
Comment from Janet Foor
And fun it was.... I enjoyed the poem in the beginning and second section too. Delightful humor and very creative....or maybe it's just true. (smiling)
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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And fun it was.... I enjoyed the poem in the beginning and second section too. Delightful humor and very creative....or maybe it's just true. (smiling)
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Maybe it just is ... thx Janet!
Comment from Karen Denise
I absolutely love this!! How creative and clever! The way you mixed in the Star Trek references was masterful. I'm so glad to hear you're turning off that TV! I have NO doubt that there's far better programming in your future! Screw that guy. Well, no, don't do that. Screw one of those new boyfriends! Excellent work, and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I absolutely love this!! How creative and clever! The way you mixed in the Star Trek references was masterful. I'm so glad to hear you're turning off that TV! I have NO doubt that there's far better programming in your future! Screw that guy. Well, no, don't do that. Screw one of those new boyfriends! Excellent work, and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Absolutely NOT! :):):) Thx so much, Karen!
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
This was humorous. The repetition of the imaginary boyfriends was great. Yes a wife should have her freedom. I like the line that they aren't conjoined twins. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This was humorous. The repetition of the imaginary boyfriends was great. Yes a wife should have her freedom. I like the line that they aren't conjoined twins. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thx Kirsten! :)
Comment from Boogienights
This is really funny, well done. I love the premise, I wish that my husband thought I've had boyfriends...that would be a compliment. This is a good entry for the contest, best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This is really funny, well done. I love the premise, I wish that my husband thought I've had boyfriends...that would be a compliment. This is a good entry for the contest, best of luck. :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thx boogie!
