Comment from Karen Cherry

Excellent

Good gravy, I would not have gone. But, then my brains work good. I would have already called for pickup. I would have made up a story if necessary, of drugs and forced sex maybe. It is all like a very warped episode of "Fantasy Island". You write well though. Karen

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

thanks. I just added the fifth chapter and love to leave the reader in suspense.
Katharine

reply by Karen Cherry on 30-Mar-2025

I will read it believe you me. I am hooked. I just posted "Mildred Manages". You might like it. Karen

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is an excellent chapter.I wonder who is behind this adventure in the Emerald Isle.It keeps me reading, and I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Thanks so much! If you mean who started the story, it's Begin Again (Carol) but I messed it up by not putting chapter 5 in the right place. I can't wait to see what somebody writes next.
Thanks again, Katharine

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I wish I could keep up with this story. I've only managed to read the peopl I follow. I enjoyed this installation. I think Eve bit off more than she should have and someone wants to keep her quiet. Very engaging. Gretchen

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

thanks, Gretchen. I'm curious to see how it develops from here. I Iove the different perspectives.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

So, I want to know where this story by committee is going. Apparently, they are going to explore a cave while the tide is out, and they seem to be properly outfitted. Max has given them a tide chart, but is it necessarily correct?

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

I guess we shall see. He he ho ho har!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is an excellent, and creative continuation to the Emerald Isle adventure. Exploring a cave always adds mystery and suspense. The dialogue was perfect as guests asked questions to determine if the cave trip would be safe. You ended your chapter with the perfect cliffhanger.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

thank you! I'm looking forward to see where it goes from here. (picture spooky music :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good and interesting chapter you have penned. I wish it could have gone on for a little while longer. You used great descriptive words. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

thanks, Teri! I don't know how to get it added to chapter 4. Any advise you have would be welcome.
Katharine

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Just got on the site this morning (so much stuff going on) and I was happy to see your post. You've added another layer, especially with Eve missing now. Interesting! Thanks for joining us and for the awesome chapter.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

Carol, it didn't get added to the rest. I'm sorry. I didn't know how to do that.

Comment from Tim Margetts

Excellent

This is interesting and fun, Katharine.
I haven't read any of the other parts but I am getting the vibe of either some kind of sick snuff show and they are being filmed, or something else, kidnapping, extortion.
Maybe the girl missing was taken because of her looks.
Interesting indeed.
Tim x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

Thanks, Tim. I answered this once, but apparently it didn't take.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I tried to help Begin Again who started this thing, but didn't write it until last night and I was tired, so we'll see if it got included in the original.

reply by Tim Margetts on 27-Mar-2025

Ahh, this is one of Carol's multi-author jobs, that makes sense :-)
Tim x

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

it didn't get included with original. Go to Begin Again's portfolio, go down to Emerald Isle post and there will be the first 4 chapters

reply by Tim Margetts on 27-Mar-2025

I shall :-)

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

and if you know how I can get chapter 5 added to the first 4, I would surely appreciate it!!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I wonder what sort of competition they entered? This sounds like an Agatha Christie mystery and I enjoyed the ride here. Just one adjustment: (They) were ready to go. Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

yikes. thanks, for catching, Dolly. I didn't write that until last night. Thought I'd leave a challenge for whoever took the next chapter.

Comment from EeanBlack

Excellent

Yeah, Max is creepy. His name should be Eean. I will not add to this. I like where it is going. I think this is a genius idea. At this point, anything goes and I can't really tell the outcome.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

don't know who has the next chapter, but thought I'd leave them with a challenge. heh.

reply by EeanBlack on 27-Mar-2025

I still think the concept is cool, so long as the continuity isn't compromised.