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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "14 Acres"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
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Comment from Alexander E Poet
Most Excellent work! I Hear the cheers for this, Lot of depth , never heard it put like this before, lots soul in this piece ,good work
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Most Excellent work! I Hear the cheers for this, Lot of depth , never heard it put like this before, lots soul in this piece ,good work
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I look forward to sharing my work for the purpose of quality reviews. Your time and efforts are worth their weight in gold.
Comment from D. Longo
The timeline in this work is a treasure. Seen from the eyes of a farmer, wonder retained 'though easily lost, the Lord's hand visible to a knowing eye, this work is truly a tribute to that Hand. Relaxing, prompting a gentle reflection, all previous lines work to announce, "An emerald green haze..." Hope in good weather, and praise for the One enabling man and crops. Thanks for posting, Blue. D.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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The timeline in this work is a treasure. Seen from the eyes of a farmer, wonder retained 'though easily lost, the Lord's hand visible to a knowing eye, this work is truly a tribute to that Hand. Relaxing, prompting a gentle reflection, all previous lines work to announce, "An emerald green haze..." Hope in good weather, and praise for the One enabling man and crops. Thanks for posting, Blue. D.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I look forward to sharing my work for the purpose of quality reviews. Your time and efforts are worth their weight in gold.
Comment from BOSSY 311
I like your theme and choice in color design to emphasize the affect.
Your bio is also rather impressive because it is real and gives the reader a better understanding of the work and who produced it. I like it.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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I like your theme and choice in color design to emphasize the affect.
Your bio is also rather impressive because it is real and gives the reader a better understanding of the work and who produced it. I like it.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I look forward to sharing my work for the purpose of quality reviews. Your time and efforts are worth their weight in gold.