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Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces

Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Nibbles"
A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

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Comment from gone2thedogs
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Nice work. As an avid angler and former fly fishing guide I really got a good laugh out of this short pun. Compact, spirited and witty with good visuals. Nice job.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2007


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    Thank you for the wonderful review. I look forward to sharing my work for the purpose of quality reviews. Your time and efforts are worth their weight in gold.
Comment from Oatmeal
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Blue-Stubby,

Good atmosphere and thrilling emotions. A cute little number.

This was a very enjoyable read. Very well reflected thoughts and opinions, expressiveness is working well.

Good flowing. There was no SPAG. No errors at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2007


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
    Thank you for the wonderful review. I look forward to sharing my work for the purpose of quality reviews. Your time and efforts are worth their weight in gold.
Comment from bookishfabler
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Okay, it's not exactly Edgar Allen Poe, but it is really cute. I really enjoyed reading it. It just had a great ring to it. Kinda like a little ditti. Thanks for sharing your brainstorm
Peace & hugs
book

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2007


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
    Thank you for the wonderful review. I look forward to sharing my work for the purpose of quality reviews. Your time and efforts are worth their weight in gold.