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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Soul War"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
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Comment from nor84
She reasons from a false comprehension
embracing glorious spectral hues of light. --I really liked "spectral hues of light". Good job. I'm not a poet, so can't judge the structure, but this read fine to me.
reply by the author on 10-May-2007
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She reasons from a false comprehension
embracing glorious spectral hues of light. --I really liked "spectral hues of light". Good job. I'm not a poet, so can't judge the structure, but this read fine to me.
Comment Written 10-May-2007
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Comment from Oatmeal
Blue-stubby,
Excellent poem. The flow was excellent. Your rhyming was very successful.
The impressions were vivid and the narration was nice. All of the lines are formatted very well.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 10-May-2007
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Blue-stubby,
Excellent poem. The flow was excellent. Your rhyming was very successful.
The impressions were vivid and the narration was nice. All of the lines are formatted very well.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 10-May-2007
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Comment from sunkist1942
The Soul War
Poetry Imagery contest
This is an excellent poem you have penned.
Surely faith will get all of us there.
Along with the strong wind of God.
This was powerful and contained a great message in it.
Great luck in the contest.
Sunkist:)
reply by the author on 10-May-2007
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The Soul War
Poetry Imagery contest
This is an excellent poem you have penned.
Surely faith will get all of us there.
Along with the strong wind of God.
This was powerful and contained a great message in it.
Great luck in the contest.
Sunkist:)
Comment Written 10-May-2007
reply by the author on 10-May-2007
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Comment from dragonqueen1983
you have a well written religious poem here. you've brough forth you opinion of faith in a clear and understandable manner. best of luck in the contest
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you have a well written religious poem here. you've brough forth you opinion of faith in a clear and understandable manner. best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-May-2007
reply by the author on 10-May-2007
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