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Comment from Trena One Who Cares
It was a sad day indeed when we saw the farmers of America lose every thing they had. I am sorry your family was one of them . God knows when we had our food grown by our farmers the food was safe not to much anymore. Good writing. I hope your new life will be great. Trena
reply by the author on 14-May-2007
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It was a sad day indeed when we saw the farmers of America lose every thing they had. I am sorry your family was one of them . God knows when we had our food grown by our farmers the food was safe not to much anymore. Good writing. I hope your new life will be great. Trena
Comment Written 14-May-2007
reply by the author on 14-May-2007
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece
Comment from Megotcha
You've captured a true story here, an elegent and descr9pt9ve wr9t9ng, somehow 9 call 9t a wr9t9ng,k not a poetry wr9t9ng 9n my eyes, more a narrat9ve, but a fabulous one at that. ( thoroughly enjoy your prof9le, one of the best and most s9ncere 9've read. The only th9ng stopp9ng me from rat9ng 9t a s9x 9s the catagory, a short story perhaps, (forg9ve the letter "aye" broken, subst9tute, the number 9). Wonderful p9ece. Thank you, MeGotcha
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You've captured a true story here, an elegent and descr9pt9ve wr9t9ng, somehow 9 call 9t a wr9t9ng,k not a poetry wr9t9ng 9n my eyes, more a narrat9ve, but a fabulous one at that. ( thoroughly enjoy your prof9le, one of the best and most s9ncere 9've read. The only th9ng stopp9ng me from rat9ng 9t a s9x 9s the catagory, a short story perhaps, (forg9ve the letter "aye" broken, subst9tute, the number 9). Wonderful p9ece. Thank you, MeGotcha
Comment Written 14-May-2007
reply by the author on 14-May-2007
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Thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece
Comment from nor84
Grandpa argues that value --did you mean "argues THE value of the farm?
Fooled by a fall sense of a new --did you mean FALSE sense?
"Tragedy" is misspelled in the title.
Sad, sad poem.
reply by the author on 14-May-2007
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Grandpa argues that value --did you mean "argues THE value of the farm?
Fooled by a fall sense of a new --did you mean FALSE sense?
"Tragedy" is misspelled in the title.
Sad, sad poem.
Comment Written 14-May-2007
reply by the author on 14-May-2007
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thank you and i will use the revisions.
