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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "A New Path"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
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Comment from Jewell McChesney
We seem to have less now, yet so much more,
seeing things differently than we did before.
Sometimes the Lord shakes us from our tree
So he can place us where he needs us to be.
Oh yesssss! This is just flat out good stuff!
what can I say?
I will post a review when one hits me between the eyes or tugs at my heart strings.
Nevertheless, it's ALL been really good so far.
J
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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We seem to have less now, yet so much more,
seeing things differently than we did before.
Sometimes the Lord shakes us from our tree
So he can place us where he needs us to be.
Oh yesssss! This is just flat out good stuff!
what can I say?
I will post a review when one hits me between the eyes or tugs at my heart strings.
Nevertheless, it's ALL been really good so far.
J
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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wow... this is really working out in my favor. I like new friends that are not easily offended by my obvious inadequate tendencies. Thanks for another flattering review. I will check out your latest post... with high expectations.
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Oh favored one....:-) Be blessed, ttyl
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ty... be blessed
Comment from Auburn Tiger Fan
lovely poem. material things are nothing compared to yur luv ones.. truely a great poem.. rhymes is good. flow is good. more people should feel this way.. lookin forward to more of yur poetry Blue-Stubby.. thank you.. Auburn Tiger Fan
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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lovely poem. material things are nothing compared to yur luv ones.. truely a great poem.. rhymes is good. flow is good. more people should feel this way.. lookin forward to more of yur poetry Blue-Stubby.. thank you.. Auburn Tiger Fan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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Thank you for your kind review. It is appriciated.
Comment from ritter1116
Wow I really liked this! Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Plus it told a story which those kinds are my favorates. would like your permission to blog this on my blog. Can I? (myspace)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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Wow I really liked this! Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Plus it told a story which those kinds are my favorates. would like your permission to blog this on my blog. Can I? (myspace)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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Granted with honor and humility... thank you
Comment from heyjude
Blue-stubby,
Very well done. Heavenly treasures will be so much better than earthly ones. Rhymes and flows very well. Very good message. Only one suggestion. I wonder if it would be better to we seem to have less now, yet so much more. Just a thought. Still, I think it's wonderful.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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Blue-stubby,
Very well done. Heavenly treasures will be so much better than earthly ones. Rhymes and flows very well. Very good message. Only one suggestion. I wonder if it would be better to we seem to have less now, yet so much more. Just a thought. Still, I think it's wonderful.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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thank you and I will make the posotive addition
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
Very inspirational piece. It's funny what it takes to make us wake-up to the understanding that there is so much more to life.... Awesome write my friend.... Dancing in Dreams
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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Hello my friend,
Very inspirational piece. It's funny what it takes to make us wake-up to the understanding that there is so much more to life.... Awesome write my friend.... Dancing in Dreams
Comment Written 16-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2008
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Thank you for your kind review. It is appriciated.
