Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Institutional Warfare"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
4 total reviews
Comment from LovnPeace
i understand staving off the guilt. I try to save mayself all i can and tru to get that message to my children also with the sick or elderly. How sad though for you. Blessings. L&P*
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2008
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i understand staving off the guilt. I try to save mayself all i can and tru to get that message to my children also with the sick or elderly. How sad though for you. Blessings. L&P*
Comment Written 17-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2008
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Thank you for your kind review, it is appriciated.
Comment from AlvinTEthington
You describe psychopathic personality quite well. There is anger and violence here, even rage, expressed. The schizophrenia, the loss of contact with reality, comes through, although the subject is slightly connected with reality, as some of the events described seem quite real. A very sad and poignant look at mental illness. Good use of the rhyme scheme aabb--the lilting tone of that rhyme scheme seems appropriate for a person who is mentally ill.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2008
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You describe psychopathic personality quite well. There is anger and violence here, even rage, expressed. The schizophrenia, the loss of contact with reality, comes through, although the subject is slightly connected with reality, as some of the events described seem quite real. A very sad and poignant look at mental illness. Good use of the rhyme scheme aabb--the lilting tone of that rhyme scheme seems appropriate for a person who is mentally ill.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2008
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Thank you for reviewing the piece, I appriciate your efforts.
Comment from Broken Fingers
This is a skilled poem at conveying an independence and a defiance and yet it left me feeling very sad at the human response to an illness when it is through the personality or the brain compared to more obvious physical illness.
Mr H
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2008
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This is a skilled poem at conveying an independence and a defiance and yet it left me feeling very sad at the human response to an illness when it is through the personality or the brain compared to more obvious physical illness.
Mr H
Comment Written 17-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2008
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Thank you for reviewing this piece, it was greatly appriciated.
Comment from Kingsland
I enjoyed reading this piece of humorous poetic thought
as the poem flow well with excellent imagery in its lines
form and format were perfect for this write
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this most humorous poem... John
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2008
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I enjoyed reading this piece of humorous poetic thought
as the poem flow well with excellent imagery in its lines
form and format were perfect for this write
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this most humorous poem... John
Comment Written 17-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2008
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Thank you for reviewing this piece, it was greatly appriciated.
