Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Spirit of McTavish"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
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Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Great piece here. Thoroughly enjoyed the read...excellent content that followed a great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Very nice job. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Great piece here. Thoroughly enjoyed the read...excellent content that followed a great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Very nice job. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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thank you for your time to review my work and your words are uplifting
Comment from peggysis64
No need for luck from a four leaf clover.
It's the Holy Trinity that'll win them over.
A well written, bouncy little piece created by its rhyme and rhythm.
He comprised a short note as he cried. (He composed)
The memo arrived to the victims wife, (victim's)
spreading symbols of gods holy word (God's)
kay
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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No need for luck from a four leaf clover.
It's the Holy Trinity that'll win them over.
A well written, bouncy little piece created by its rhyme and rhythm.
He comprised a short note as he cried. (He composed)
The memo arrived to the victims wife, (victim's)
spreading symbols of gods holy word (God's)
kay
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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super... thanks for the edits and i will put them to good use
Comment from adewpearl
he comprised a short note should be composed
victim's wife add apostrophe
I enjoyed your story poem very much - it reads aloud well with good cadence and rhyming couplets, and it is life-affirming in its message
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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he comprised a short note should be composed
victim's wife add apostrophe
I enjoyed your story poem very much - it reads aloud well with good cadence and rhyming couplets, and it is life-affirming in its message
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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super... thanks for the edits and i will put them to good use
