Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Inoculated from Eternity"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
3 total reviews
Comment from LadyMary
It is frightening to think that someone can live a life so far removed from the real world, but sadly, so many do. The harm is immeasurable and that person is existing, not living. To walk with faith and peace of heart is such a blessing. The writing is excellent. The detail of the detachment is so visual. Well done. LadyMary
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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It is frightening to think that someone can live a life so far removed from the real world, but sadly, so many do. The harm is immeasurable and that person is existing, not living. To walk with faith and peace of heart is such a blessing. The writing is excellent. The detail of the detachment is so visual. Well done. LadyMary
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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thank you for the fine review... very "Lady like". Your time and effort is much appreciated.
Comment from Nicollette
this is a really moving poem, it reminds me of an old couple which look out of the window as I walk to school with my children. They live on the top floor flat and you always make a point of looking up to wave to them as we pass, You have captured the loneliness that comes to when you are older and alone.
Well done
Nicollettex
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2008
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this is a really moving poem, it reminds me of an old couple which look out of the window as I walk to school with my children. They live on the top floor flat and you always make a point of looking up to wave to them as we pass, You have captured the loneliness that comes to when you are older and alone.
Well done
Nicollettex
Comment Written 28-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2008
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a good piece
of freeverse, cleverly
thoughtout, with a smooth
flow to the words...
A pleasure to review,
Margaret.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2008
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This is a good piece
of freeverse, cleverly
thoughtout, with a smooth
flow to the words...
A pleasure to review,
Margaret.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2008
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thank you for your review and the time and effort in doing so. It is much appreciated.
