Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "My Duty, My Daughter"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
3 total reviews
Comment from maggieJo
Yes, blue-stubby (intriguing user name), you have taken me back half a century when my daughters and sons gave me gift of thankfulness to the Father
for they gift the were to us.
Your poem is so precious as you allow us to look at your heart of love for this pure and innocent child sleeping. Thank for sharing this.
maggiejo
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Yes, blue-stubby (intriguing user name), you have taken me back half a century when my daughters and sons gave me gift of thankfulness to the Father
for they gift the were to us.
Your poem is so precious as you allow us to look at your heart of love for this pure and innocent child sleeping. Thank for sharing this.
maggiejo
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. i am honored and lifted by your heartfelt comments. Reviews like this are truly a catalyst for stringing a few poems out within a short period of time.
Comment from mindseye
You do a wonderful job letting us know how fortunate you are for your daughter. It is a beautiful thing to appreciate something in your life so much. A wonderful tribute to your daughter that I am sure she will be very touched by one day!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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You do a wonderful job letting us know how fortunate you are for your daughter. It is a beautiful thing to appreciate something in your life so much. A wonderful tribute to your daughter that I am sure she will be very touched by one day!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. i am honored and lifted by your heartfelt comments. Reviews like this are truly a catalyst for stringing a few poems out within a short period of time.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
"I don't have the manual to life; I think it was lost in delivery or maybe there was no room for it in the carry on compartment..."
Ok, I know that is not from the poem I am reviewing but from your bio. Wow, I'm impressed already!
Now about this poem, THANK YOU!
I watched my son sleep yesterday morning and didn't want to interupt his peace and this poem reminds me of the precious moment.
You have an ease with words. I can see you don't just let 'er roll (that tip of your gel pen)without allowing your spirit to speak through your ideas.
WONDERFUL. With one read of your bio and one glance at this beautiful piece, I shall now become a faithful fan.
God bless you,
Jewell
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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"I don't have the manual to life; I think it was lost in delivery or maybe there was no room for it in the carry on compartment..."
Ok, I know that is not from the poem I am reviewing but from your bio. Wow, I'm impressed already!
Now about this poem, THANK YOU!
I watched my son sleep yesterday morning and didn't want to interupt his peace and this poem reminds me of the precious moment.
You have an ease with words. I can see you don't just let 'er roll (that tip of your gel pen)without allowing your spirit to speak through your ideas.
WONDERFUL. With one read of your bio and one glance at this beautiful piece, I shall now become a faithful fan.
God bless you,
Jewell
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. i am honored and lifted by your heartfelt comments. Reviews like this are truly a catalyst for stringing a few poems out within a short period of time. Thank you for inspiring my spirit. Be Blessed and keep writing. I must check out your work and review with great expectations.
