Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Special Delivery"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
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Comment from WordPainter
I could barely read for the tears and the lump in my heart. Such a sweet write, and I cannot imagine anyone not being touched by this.
You mentioned in your profile not having the manual to life. That amazed me, considering the subject of this poem. Might I suggest the Bible? It has been an excellent life manual for me. Thank you for sharing this lovely illustration of how God can work through a little child's sincere prayer. Six stars it earned!
God bless you,
Lois
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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I could barely read for the tears and the lump in my heart. Such a sweet write, and I cannot imagine anyone not being touched by this.
You mentioned in your profile not having the manual to life. That amazed me, considering the subject of this poem. Might I suggest the Bible? It has been an excellent life manual for me. Thank you for sharing this lovely illustration of how God can work through a little child's sincere prayer. Six stars it earned!
God bless you,
Lois
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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the manual suggest my lack ability to react perfect to every new happening, playful complaining. the Bible is as you stated the MANUAL for life and it is the only tool that has dug me out and planted me in good soil. thank you for making reference to the Bible... it shows that you are doing God's work... trying to expand his army, making those you touch... aware. for that, i give you all the stars. Be blessed and thank you for connecting with this piece. your rating is a wonderful surprise
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I appreciate your replay, and am glad to know that you are finding hope in this wonderful manual as well.
God bless you,
Lois
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Oh, sorry, I meant to mention early. I'd suggest making the green a very pale green and the red as dark as possible for conrast. Christmas colors are good, but I have some vision problems and I had to highlight this in order to have enough contrast to read it.
Blessings,
Lois
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it is all good...you have done a wonderful job reviewing and communicating. thank you
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My pleasure,
Lois
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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you have done very well in this piece but I myself feel your colour choices are wrong yes very christmassy but bad for the eyes well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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writing a friend. >>> to a
you have done very well in this piece but I myself feel your colour choices are wrong yes very christmassy but bad for the eyes well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. i will consider any changes that would add to the work.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Praise them indeed!
This is really outstanding,
something quite different
that drew my attention and
held it. It is cleverly
thoughtout, with good presentation.
The words flow smoothly, and both
rhythm and rhyme.
A real pleasure to review,
Thank you for sharing,
Margaret.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Praise them indeed!
This is really outstanding,
something quite different
that drew my attention and
held it. It is cleverly
thoughtout, with good presentation.
The words flow smoothly, and both
rhythm and rhyme.
A real pleasure to review,
Thank you for sharing,
Margaret.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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thank you for the time and effort in reviewing this piece.
