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Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces

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A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith

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Comment from Jewell McChesney
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This is alot more than spit, gum and shoelaces!
It's fantastic imagery and descriptive in many ways.
You've created a masterpiece for this contest.

Good luck!


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2008

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    thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. it is much appreciated.
Comment from nor84
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Hi, stubby. Yes, I've been to Sequoias and I agree with your poetry. Good choice of words. A picture would have been nice, but that's just my opinion.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2008

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    thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece. it is much appreciated.
Comment from EllieKaye
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Hi Blue-
Your profile is fun and unique. I enjoyed it. Your poem is also fun and it brought memories and enjoyment. I adore the redwoods. I grew up in the Santa Cruz Mountains of California amongst the unique beauty of them. There's nothing that looks or smells like them- anywhere.

Take care, and keep writing!

EllieKaye

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2008

reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
    awesome connection... thanks for the review and the rating
Comment from Vincent B.
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Nice haiku, Blue-Stubby. It really shows the force of nature in my opinion. Your word usage was excellent, what with "marvel", "gargantuan", and "steadfast". I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, keep it up.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2008

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    thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece.