Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
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Comment from raimie
That photo is a priceless gem. It makes one feel at peace just looking at it and your words are the perfect companion. Yes, the thanking of god for a new day should be priority one. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2008
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That photo is a priceless gem. It makes one feel at peace just looking at it and your words are the perfect companion. Yes, the thanking of god for a new day should be priority one. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece.
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT IN REVIEWING THE PIECE. IT IS MUST APPRECIATED.
Comment from RaymondJohn
As nice an ending to the Haiku as I have ever seen. I can't imagine a better wish than to have a new chance to love. As with all good Haiku, you have fine movement in the words, instruction and a delightful ending. Best. Ray.
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As nice an ending to the Haiku as I have ever seen. I can't imagine a better wish than to have a new chance to love. As with all good Haiku, you have fine movement in the words, instruction and a delightful ending. Best. Ray.
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2008
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT IN REVIEWING THE PIECE. IT IS MUST APPRECIATED.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
this is a very good piece of haiku i like the concept of the poem, it is well written well presented and there are no adjustments needed
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this is a very good piece of haiku i like the concept of the poem, it is well written well presented and there are no adjustments needed
Comment Written 10-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2008
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT IN REVIEWING THE PIECE. IT IS MUST APPRECIATED.
