Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "The Eldest Gift"A Progression Of Expression From Fiction To Faith
3 total reviews
Comment from Karen B.
This is such a loving tribute and well-written. Thanks for sharing it, she sounds like a wonderful person. I like how you've ended each stanza with a question. Great poem! Karen
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
  |
This is such a loving tribute and well-written. Thanks for sharing it, she sounds like a wonderful person. I like how you've ended each stanza with a question. Great poem! Karen
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
-
thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece, it is much appreciated
Comment from Nanny 6
What a great blessing to have a daughter that serves the Lord. You have every right to be joyful and proud of her. Your poem depicts the love of a proud father and his daughter. God has truly blessed you! Judy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
|
What a great blessing to have a daughter that serves the Lord. You have every right to be joyful and proud of her. Your poem depicts the love of a proud father and his daughter. God has truly blessed you! Judy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
-
thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece, it is much appreciated
Comment from treaclemoon
What a beautiful tribute to your daughter, so full of love and sincerety. I love the last two lines,a simply beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
|
What a beautiful tribute to your daughter, so full of love and sincerety. I love the last two lines,a simply beautiful poem.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
-
thank you for your time and effort in reviewing this piece, it is much appreciated
