Comment from Diane Marie

Excellent

Hi Beth, this is a really lovely, thought provoking poem and if I had six stars they would be for you but alas i only have five. The verse
Life needs to sound a warning bell
when chapters start to close,
is really something to think about...wouldn't it be wonderful, so we could make the most, but maybe we just need to make the most in the first place. Take Care Diane

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Diane Marie, Thank you so much for the review and for you lovely comments.
Beth

Comment from RADIO

Excellent

Absolutely beautiful. Filled with
wistful words and insight into
the years and passing seasons of our lives.
This is a Gem of a poem Bethshelby.
Radio

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Radio, Thank you so much for the review and you kind remarks. I'm glad you liked it.
Beth