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Comment from fionageorge
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Carol, what a cute and inventive and imaginative story, and it goes to show, it is not always external beauty that wins out. Well written, so much packed into so few words.
Good luck in the contest.
Warmest regards
Marijke

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Marijke,

    Thanks for enjoying this silly story. Thanks for the generous comments and review. Carol
Comment from Belinda
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Ha ... 6X. How funny! So smart and lucky of you to get this picture of Drusilla wearing orange socks and combat boots. Nobody but a creative person like you would write such a story. Did you find the artwork first or think of the plot first?

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Belinda,

    I got the story idea and just lucked out when I found the artwork..It was perfect! Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from gypsycaravan
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Now that's certainly a new and clever take on the Cinderella theme. It made me laugh picturing the socks and boots. Your choice of artwork was perfect. Good luck with the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    gypsy

    I am so pleased you enjoyed this short ditty. Thank you for the generous review. Carol
Comment from leesm
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Very cute story Carol.
Orange socks and combat boots!
Not exactly cinderella.
The great artwork adds to the humor.
Good luck in the contest.
Warmly,
-Lee

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Lee,

    My reverse Cinderella turned into a beauty though! Thanks for the wonderful review. Carol
Comment from IndianaIrish
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A delightful micro-fiction story using orange socks as your theme, Carol! I enjoyed the fairy tale ending and wish you best of luck in the contest.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Karyn,

    Our wee leprechauns sent me this photo and said make our friend a star! Smiles, Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
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How funny. It's great that the prince looked past the outside and found the beauty within, most men wouldn't do that. Great little story.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Joy,

    I posed for that picture...Don't you just love it? Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jnetgame
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Great job. I don't know which I enjoyed more, watching the witch dance, or your micro fiction story. You're right, everyone has a dream :) Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Jnetgame,

    So glad you enjoyed this little ditty. Thanks so much. Smiles, CArol
Comment from BethShelby
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This is an adorable little fairytale. You picked a great picture for it or did the picture inspire the story? He must have known she had a spell on her because that witch wouldn't being something one would see across the breakfast table from him every morning. LOL

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Beth

    I thought of the story and then stumbled on the artwork..Don't you just love it! Smiles, Carol
Comment from hotstuff
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What a lovely twist to the age old fairy tale 'Cinderella'. Your story is great, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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    hotstuff

    Thank you so much for the awesome wishes and review. Carol
Comment from Sasha
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This is absolutely delightful. You have done a marvelous job with this and I am impressed that you were able to tell such a fun story in only 100 words. I think this is a terrific entry for the contest and I wish you all the best. I apologize for not having reviewed more of your work this past few weeks. I have been busy and just haven't had much time.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Sasha,

    I can imagine all the catch up you have to do after your house guest left...But you can breathe again. Thanks for the review...Carol