Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "First Class What?"Short Stories
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Comment from Bob O
I fly a lot and I fly with pigs a lot but the pretend to be people. sometimes there are cows and chickens who also pretend to be people. Your story made me laugh.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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I fly a lot and I fly with pigs a lot but the pretend to be people. sometimes there are cows and chickens who also pretend to be people. Your story made me laugh.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Bob,
You are so right about that one! Thanks for the comments. Smiles to you...
Comment from DearlB
This is a delightful story about one of the worst disasters in history.
I found no spag problems and it was an easy read.
Best of luck,
Dearl
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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This is a delightful story about one of the worst disasters in history.
I found no spag problems and it was an easy read.
Best of luck,
Dearl
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Dearl,
Thank you for the kind review and comments. I appreciate it very much. Smiles to you....
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Funny how our opinion of someone can change in seconds.
Not quite the luxury flight she expected, but I suppose all's well that ends well.
Interesting take on the contest.
Juliette
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Funny how our opinion of someone can change in seconds.
Not quite the luxury flight she expected, but I suppose all's well that ends well.
Interesting take on the contest.
Juliette
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Juliette,
Thank you for the wonderful comments. I appreciate your time and review. Smiles to you.....
Comment from adewpearl
I had long since figured out the pilot was the owner, but that didn't spoil the fun - I loved this "volunteer's" unusual somewhat spoiled attitude. One really had to agree with the good doctor and wonder what the heck she thought she would be doing once she arrived. LOL This is a fun story and should do well in this contest for a humorous story about a long flight :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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I had long since figured out the pilot was the owner, but that didn't spoil the fun - I loved this "volunteer's" unusual somewhat spoiled attitude. One really had to agree with the good doctor and wonder what the heck she thought she would be doing once she arrived. LOL This is a fun story and should do well in this contest for a humorous story about a long flight :-) Brooke
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Brooke,
One wonders. that's for sure! She is really going to grow up fast when she's faced with the devastation. Thanks for the wonderful review...Smiles to you
Comment from Slush Pile
Nice story with a humourous touch. Just what the doctor ordered, I dare say. Good story, good entry into the contest. Blessings always, Slush Pile (denny)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Nice story with a humourous touch. Just what the doctor ordered, I dare say. Good story, good entry into the contest. Blessings always, Slush Pile (denny)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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denny,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I am glad that you enjoyed my story. Smiles to you.....
Comment from jkswan
This is a great story, I love it. Makes you wonder if they will end up together. I wish you luck in the contest. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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This is a great story, I love it. Makes you wonder if they will end up together. I wish you luck in the contest. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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jkswan,
Hmmm...I wonder..Could be very promising even if she can't stand the cows! Smiles to you....
Comment from pugdogy
well written,,,but this left me wanting more,,,I wanted to see what happened when they finally arrived at their destination,,,keep up the great work...
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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well written,,,but this left me wanting more,,,I wanted to see what happened when they finally arrived at their destination,,,keep up the great work...
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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pugdogy,
Wouldn't that be interesting? But the restricted word limit and the required flight left us both wanting more...oh well, next time...Smiles to you....
Comment from Brendajay
Great narrative. Enjoyed the banter. Nice surprise too with the farm animals on board. Good lead for the reader on the doctor possibly being the pilot. Thanks for the good read this morning. No suggestion.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Great narrative. Enjoyed the banter. Nice surprise too with the farm animals on board. Good lead for the reader on the doctor possibly being the pilot. Thanks for the good read this morning. No suggestion.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Brenda,
I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the wonderful comments. Smiles to you....
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol I wasn't expecting that ending. I can imagine that being an exceedingly long flight and rather smelly lol. I wish you good luck with this story
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Lol I wasn't expecting that ending. I can imagine that being an exceedingly long flight and rather smelly lol. I wish you good luck with this story
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Wendy,
I am so glad that it made you laugh...Thank you for the wonderful comments. Smiles to you...
