Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Pirates and Boys"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
47 total reviews
Comment from lola29
Carol, this is adorable. I think everyone enjoyed the movie, Pirate of the Carribean. I know I did. You've entered a great creation, as always.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Carol, this is adorable. I think everyone enjoyed the movie, Pirate of the Carribean. I know I did. You've entered a great creation, as always.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Lola,
Thanks for reading and enjoying. Appreciate the comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Phil Kitom
Wow carol you have done well with such few
words in getting across this story. The words
also take the reader to the event and gives
them a picture of that snow in their minds...
So hard with only 100 words...
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Wow carol you have done well with such few
words in getting across this story. The words
also take the reader to the event and gives
them a picture of that snow in their minds...
So hard with only 100 words...
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Phil,
How are you my friend. Hope all is well.
Thank you for reading my little micro fiction. Thought of a better one after I posted this. If you have time, I think you will get a laugh, Touch of Green...Take care! Smiles, Carol
Comment from --Turtle.
Hi Carol, I went and read this Micro-Fiction.
I think this fit the micro fiction genre.
Though needing to be short, the setting feels complete, there was a clear, beginning, middle, end, plot, people I could imagine, action. I left the story thinking snow in Florida. hmmm.
I didn't have to pause for anything that confused me.
--Turtle.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Hi Carol, I went and read this Micro-Fiction.
I think this fit the micro fiction genre.
Though needing to be short, the setting feels complete, there was a clear, beginning, middle, end, plot, people I could imagine, action. I left the story thinking snow in Florida. hmmm.
I didn't have to pause for anything that confused me.
--Turtle.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Turtle,
Thanks for reading this one...I wrote another "Touch of Green" which I wish I would have thought of before posting this one...Oh well, senior moments I guess. Thanks so much...Smiles, Carol
Comment from L.lora
Very entertaining and enduring,
one of those snap shot moments
that one keeps in the memory
photo book. Most enjoyable and
the twist on the end says so----
much, could be true. no nits
or spags. Lora
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Very entertaining and enduring,
one of those snap shot moments
that one keeps in the memory
photo book. Most enjoyable and
the twist on the end says so----
much, could be true. no nits
or spags. Lora
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Lora,
Yes, I was buying tomatoes yesterday and thought of all the high prices because of the snow in Florida...Glad you enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
Comment from OldVet
Cute.
A couple of suggestions:
'Pirates of the Caribbean' [Use double quotations " ]
"Blow me timbers;
It's "Shiver" me timbers, from when cannonballs would blast the wood timbers into shivers.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Cute.
A couple of suggestions:
'Pirates of the Caribbean' [Use double quotations " ]
"Blow me timbers;
It's "Shiver" me timbers, from when cannonballs would blast the wood timbers into shivers.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Old Vet,
See what happens when your mind starts to go..meaning me...blow the man down and shiver me timbers got jumbled in the brains...Thanks for the help. Smiles, Carol
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That was compliments of "Myth Busters"!
Comment from anabelle
Cute story. The Pirates of the Caribbean movie and attraction at DisneyWorld are wonderful fodder for the imagination.
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Cute story. The Pirates of the Caribbean movie and attraction at DisneyWorld are wonderful fodder for the imagination.
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Anabelle,
Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate the comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have taken Steven, my youngest, to every Pirates of the Caribbean movie. My only fear is that they will make another sequel. I didn't like the first one, let alone the others, but Steven has loved each and every one. Your micro flash fiction was great.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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I have taken Steven, my youngest, to every Pirates of the Caribbean movie. My only fear is that they will make another sequel. I didn't like the first one, let alone the others, but Steven has loved each and every one. Your micro flash fiction was great.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Barbara,
Prepare yourself...another is in the makings to be released in May of 2011. A bit of time though. Thanks for the comments. Smiles, Carol
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Oh dear.....Steven will be in college then, maybe a group of guys can go. Knowing him, he'll want to go with me because we have always done it that way.
Comment from dmjones
Hi Carol, I cute little piece of flash. Well done in my opinion following the cannonball theme. I didn't spot any errors. Were they in Florida or was the billboard just there to tease them?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Hi Carol, I cute little piece of flash. Well done in my opinion following the cannonball theme. I didn't spot any errors. Were they in Florida or was the billboard just there to tease them?
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Donna,
No, I wrote this after watching the news about how high our produce costs was going thanks to the snow in Florida...so I put them there. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Alexandra.Obreja
A beautiful story about a wonderful realtionship between father and son. I liked it very much.
I wish you good luck in the competition!
Have a wonderful day!
Best regards,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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A beautiful story about a wonderful realtionship between father and son. I liked it very much.
I wish you good luck in the competition!
Have a wonderful day!
Best regards,
Alex
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Alex,
Thanks for the marvelous review. Glad you enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sharesy
This was cute.You could have killed two birds with one stone for the contest, by putting coconut palms on the billboard with the bikini clad girl. This winter has been very strange. The Ottawa valley where I live, has had little snow this year. We're already well into spring, where many of the southern states were buried in snow. Who'd athunk it, eh?
I liked this very much. The Florida sign in the snow was an unexpected plot twist. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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This was cute.You could have killed two birds with one stone for the contest, by putting coconut palms on the billboard with the bikini clad girl. This winter has been very strange. The Ottawa valley where I live, has had little snow this year. We're already well into spring, where many of the southern states were buried in snow. Who'd athunk it, eh?
I liked this very much. The Florida sign in the snow was an unexpected plot twist. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Sharesy,
The last few days have been in the fifties though they haven't promised to stay...At least the snow is melting away. I live in Illinois about 100 miles west of Lake Michigan....All I want is the sun!
Thanks for the kind review. Hope you are having a nice day.
smiles, Carol
