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Comment from phaedra
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This is a fun one. The Fartress was quick witted to tell
the youngster that the drinks age you fast. Think I would stick to ginger ale after that.


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
    phaedra,

    They would just tell her that she's old and just doesn't understand...then when they learn for themselves some youngster will say the same to them...Life revolves...Smiles, Carol
Comment from patmedium
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But... but... but I'm still sniggering at Pirates and boys! Now you've complicated matters no end! How could you do this to me? OH! Just been and checked... it's not in the competition. OK. Pat.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
    Pat,

    Glad you enjoyed and I made you laugh...Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
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This is so cute. I love these fun pieces. This one sounds as though it might have been inspired by the picture. Hattie is a wicked lady. Those gals might just give up drinking.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
    Beth,

    I had a thought, then searched for an animated picture and blended the two...Thanks so much for the kind comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from sgalletti
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Hi Carol! Another fabulous, funny and creative write in just a few words. Never tried creme de menthe---to sweet for me. But your words a re a great liquer! Sue

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
    Sue,

    Thanks for the kind response. As always, I appreciate you stopping by. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Joan E.
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Another clever animation too! Yes, let's blame anything and everything else for feeling and looking the part of getting older. Hattie tickled my funny bone also. Thanks for sharing your Sunday morning humor.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
    Joan,

    Age just sneaks up on us and then we are there.."senior citizen" and all. If you can't laugh at it...it hurts too much to cry! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Oh, I love it - I've a funny
sense of humour myself and am
quick with it, so really
appreciated this.

Where do you find our moving pictures, Carol...
Margaret.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
    Margaret,

    Thank you for the wonderful review...Don't you just love getting old...Hattie has such a striking resemblance to me sometimes. LOL If you type in animated clipart or animated "whatever you are looking for" most the times you can find one.

    I've written another one called Pirates and Boys...You might like this one too!

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Realist101
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! My day is made. Yes, a little laugh helps Carol, and this did it for me!!!! I would not dare to walk into a bar...those days are long gone for this old gal!!! Good job!!! Smiles to you!! Susan

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
    Susan,

    Yes, I love this one as well. My brain wasn't firing on all jets when I wrote the Pirate one, posted and then thought..oh yeah! Oh well, I wasn't planning on winning any how..just having fun...Smiles, Carol
Comment from missy98writer
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Carol,
I loved your humorous story. Thanks for the belly laugh this morning. Hattie sounds like an older friend of mine from Karaoke about ten years ago. This is better than the pirate micro-fiction. Cute art work. Those creme de menthe and Irish whiskey can age a gal. I'm still stunned by Jada's purple prose, I thought I was reading a story in Penthouse. Thank God your clean fiction wiped the naughty visuals from my head.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
    Melissa,

    I like this one much better too...problem is that my old brain didn't think of it until I posted the other one. Oh wel...It was fun! Smiles, Carol
Comment from c_lucas
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This is a humorous piece. Actually it is the chemicals the alien, Frank, put in the air. This is very well written. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
    Charlie,

    That's it! I'm old because of the chemicals..can't be my fault, now can it? Smiles, Carol
reply by c_lucas on 14-Mar-2010
    DeSade described himself as a young mind in an old body.
Comment from lola29
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Carol, you are on a roll. This one would have been a great entry for the contest, as well. I love the artwork; it's perfect for the story.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
    Lola,

    Problem is ...my old brain didn't think of it until after I posted the other one. This is so much better. Ow well, wasn't planning on winning anyhow. Smiles, Carol